Here's the revised version of your chapter with corrections and slight improvements for readability and grammar. I preserved the dialogues as you requested.
Oracle's Grove
Oracle's Grove is surrounded by rolling hills and dense forest. The grove feels magical, with dappled sunlight filtering through the trees. Its atmosphere is peaceful and mystical, filled with the constant melody of birdsong, rustling leaves, and the gentle sound of flowing water.
There is also a charming, small house named Sweet House with a rustic design. It has a sloped roof, a stone chimney, and ivy creeping up its wooden walls. Inside, it boasts a cozy living room with a fireplace, a small kitchen with wooden shelves filled with jars of herbs and spices, and a single bedroom with a large window overlooking the trees.
At the heart of the grove stands a colossal, ancient tree called The Great Tree. Its gnarled and massive trunk has roots sprawling into the earth and rivers. Six stones are engraved on it, representing the six clans of Eryndor. Its silver-green leaves shimmer under the sunlight.
Two crystal-clear rivers—the Kongo River and the Tonga River—meander through the grove, converging near Sweet House in the south of Aqual and again at the northern boundary, forming the Ango River. Small wooden bridges cross the rivers, and stepping stones dot the shallows. Lilies float on the water, and colorful fish dart beneath the surface.
Wildflowers in vibrant colors bloom alongside moss-covered rocks and clusters of mushrooms. Gentle creatures like deer, rabbits, and songbirds thrive in the grove, while fireflies illuminate the area at dusk.
Evening of the Fourth Day
Four days had passed since the Elementals began their journey to Oracle's Grove. That evening, Alara and Kael stood on a small wooden bridge with their hands folded on the railing above the Kongo River.
"It's boring, right? Waiting for Oracle-sensei?" asked Kael.
"You just arrived today. I've been here for the past two days," replied Alara.
"What were you doing all this time?" Kael asked.
"Not much, just exploring the nearby areas and training my healing abilities. Oh, have you seen Sweet House?" asked Alara.
"No," said Kael.
"Okay, then. Let's go. You'll meet the others," said Alara.
"What? Others have already arrived?" Kael asked, surprised.
"Yes, except for the Air Clan's representative," said Alara.
"Of course, I can't be last," Kael smirked, beating his chest.
"You're quite funny," Alara smiled.
Sweet House
"What is this? It looks like the candy house I used to dream of when I was four feet tall," said Kael, narrowing his eyes as he stood in front of Sweet House.
"Nice imagination," laughed Alara. "Let's go inside."
They entered the house to find three girls playing cards in the living room.
"Why the heck is everybody a girl here?" Kael thought to himself, a sweat drop forming on his head.
"Hey, everyone, look! I've brought a guest," said Alara.
"What's your name, mister?" Zara rolled toward him on her knees.
"What are you doing? Stay away!" exclaimed Kael.
Lira glanced at Zara with narrowed eyes.
"Who is this muscular monster? He looks like a comic book hero," Lyra whispered to Lira.
"Hello, everyone. I'm Kael, the representative of the Fire Clan in Team Elemental," Kael bowed.
"What's the bowing even for?" Lyra said with an annoyed face.
"Nothing, he's just nervous," Alara said, placing a hand on Kael's shoulder.
"Why be nervous? We're all friends. Come, sit," Zara said, getting up.
They all sat on the sofa, and everyone introduced themselves to Kael.
"Since when have you all been here?" Kael asked.
"Since you were in your mother's womb—just kidding! I was the first to arrive on the first day, as this grove is in my district," said Lira.
"Two days earlier," said Lyra.
"Same here," added Alara and Zara.
Suddenly, a thin, womanly voice echoed in the house. "Welcome to my Sweet House."
"Who's there?" Kael shouted, unsheathing his sword as everyone stood up.
The door slowly opened. "You're quite aggressive, aren't you, Kael? Sorry to interrupt, but I'm the one you've been waiting for. My name is Oracle, your sensei. Nice to meet you, Team Elemental. It seems everyone has arrived except Orion," said Oracle, her silvery robes flowing elegantly.
"Wow!" Zara's jaw dropped.
"She's quite tall," Alara whispered to Kael.
"We've heard of you since childhood, but this is the first time we're seeing you in person!" exclaimed Zara.
"Good. Since you already know who I am, there's no need for introductions. Orion, the representative of the Air Clan, will arrive soon. Come with me; I have something to show you," said Oracle.
The Great Tree
Oracle led the group to the huge tree visible from Sweet House's bedroom.
"Most of you have probably noticed this tree and the stones on it, right?" Oracle asked.
"Yes," everyone said, except Kael, who exclaimed proudly, "Nope."
"Understandable, as you just arrived today. This is The Great Tree, located at the exact center of our country. The six stones engraved on it form a hexagon, each representing a clan. It is said that this tree is the source of Essentia, the elemental energy that flows through every human in this land.
"However, as you can see, the stones are unstable, symbolizing a great danger looming over our country. This is why you've been summoned as the guardians of the nation, prepared to fight to the death if needed. Are you all ready?" asked Oracle.
"Of course, we are!" everyone exclaimed.
"You've explained everything to us, but will you explain it all again to Orion?" Alara asked.
"He doesn't need an explanation," Oracle smirked.
Suddenly, a strong gust of wind swept past, blowing their hair wildly.
"What was that?" Kael said, his hair resembling a nest.
"It seems he has arrived," said Oracle.
A mysterious figure sat on the roof of Sweet House. They turned to look, and he jumped down. The man had silver hair, sky-blue eyes, and an eagle perched on his shoulder.
"Hello, everyone. I'm Orion, the representative of the Air Clan in Team Elemental. And this is my eagle, Kai," said Orion.
Oracle's jaw dropped when she saw the eagle.
"Kaiiiiiiiiiiiii!" Oracle shouted, and the eagle flew to her, screeching loudly.
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TO BE CONTINIUED!!