Here's the revised text with "xuan yan" replaced with "kai," grammatical corrections, and adjustments to reflect American English:
"Illegal immigration?"
"You have no room for excuses. We received the photos from the image shell sent by Amazon, the surveillance officer of 'Heaven's Gate.' Please stop arguing and be honest; leniency will be granted!"
"It's that old woman!"
Everyone from Nine Snakes immediately thought of the old woman at the Gate of Heaven.
"No wonder that old woman let us go so easily and even had the Express Shrimp bring us up. She really had no good intentions."
"However, please don't be too nervous. 'Illegal entry' is only an 11th-level crime in 'Heaven's Sanctions.' If you are willing to accept the punishment, you can be released on the spot and continue sightseeing."
"What's the punishment?"
"It's simple! Please pay ten times the entry fee!!"
"What's ten times the cost of entry?"
"One person's fee is 10 billion Egus coins, which converts to one million Berry in Qinghai..."
"Impossible!"
Hancock immediately scolded her. She had always been the one charging others, and no one had ever dared to charge her, especially not at such an exorbitant rate.
"So beautiful!!"
"How could there be such a beautiful woman!"
As soon as Hancock appeared, all the white berets were captivated by her beauty, their eyes filled with admiration.
"I want to know where the island with gold is."
"Gold? Are you talking about the Island of Gods?"
"Island of Gods?"
"Yes, that is the island where gods and priests live."
"God?!"
"God Enel, the deity who rules the entire holy land in the sky."
Everyone didn't expect that there was a so-called god here, but their faces showed joy. It was obvious they had found the right place.
Hancock pointed at the guards and said, "Hey, you, take us to the Island of Gods."
"Extremely happy!"
Many team members were eager to lead the way.
"Stop!!"
Captain Ma Jianli suppressed his impulse and shouted, "Have you forgotten the rules here?! Residents of Angel Island who go to God's Island without authorization will be punished by God!"
The faces of many team members showed expressions of fear. Their fear even overshadowed their fascination with Hancock's beauty.
At this moment, Kai said, "No need to ask them; I've already seen the location of the Island of Gods. It's only about five kilometers away from here."
"Is it that close? Then let's go there quickly!"
Everyone ignored the guards and drove the ship toward the Island of Gods.
One team member said anxiously, "Captain, they will definitely be killed by the gods."
Ma Jianli gritted his teeth and said, "So what if they are killed? These Qinghai people broke in illegally and refused to pay the fine. What's more, they are pirates from Qinghai! They are a group of lawless elements! They deserve to be killed."
Cloud Shinobi Village
This is a village hidden among the clouds, where the Sandians, the original inhabitants of the Island of Gods, live in secret.
To avoid Enel's pursuit, the Sandians could only hide here.
A man wearing a horned indigenous mask walked in. It was the masked man who had just attacked Kai and the others.
"Wapa, you're back. Did you gain anything this time?"
The young woman Laki asked immediately upon seeing the visitor.
"No, I ran into that annoying Ganfur again, and the people from Qinghai who came this time were a bit unusual."
"Unusual?"
"I attacked them before Ganfur arrived, but they blocked my attack."
"Are the people from Qinghai who came this time that powerful?"
"No matter how powerful they are, it's useless. They broke into the Holy Land in the Sky illegally. They are dead. I just don't know if they can take out one or two priests this time. Even if they all die, they are still valuable. If they can kill four priests, then it will be the perfect opportunity for us to attack Enel."
"Where's Elsa?"
"Elsa!"
A little girl opened the tent, walked out, and quickly hid behind Laki.
Here's the revised text with "xuan yan" replaced with "kai," grammatical corrections, and adjustments to reflect American English:
"Aisha, did you hear the voices of those Qinghai people?"
Aisha nodded. "Yes, they are heading to the Island of Gods now. They seem to be looking for gold."
"Hmph! The Qinghai pirates who come here are all after the gold. Those gold pieces are obviously sacred objects belonging to our Sandia. These guys deserve to die."
Kaminoshima Shrine
"God!! The priests have arrived!!"
The burly Airborne Holy Land Divine Soldier Captain Yemo said to Enel.
"Let them in."
"Open the door!!"
The shrine doors opened, and four priests walked in.
"God, why have you called us?"
"You don't seem to be taking those Qinghai people seriously!"
"Isn't it always like this? They are just a group of Qinghai people. I can send them away casually. Why were we specially summoned for this?"
Shura, the Sky Knight Priest of the Holy Land in the Sky, said with an indifferent expression.
"Yeah, hahaha! It's good for Shura to be confident, but this time the enemy is a little unusual. Their target is gold!"
"Gold!! How did they know?"
"This island was originally part of Qinghai. It's not surprising that the people from Qinghai know about it! This time, I allow all of your priests and soldiers to be dispatched."
"Everyone?! They're just some Qinghai people. God, do you really need to be so cautious?"
"Yeah, hahaha! It would be more lively with more people! Sandia will most likely take advantage of this to launch an attack, just in time to get rid of them all."
"They will be arriving soon. Let's go."
"Yes!"
The Island of Gods was very close to where they were before, and after sailing for a while, the ship saw a huge island.
This island was obviously different from the surrounding Sky Islands. Towering trees were everywhere, and most importantly, the trees were planted in soil. There was not much difference from Nine Snake Island, but it appeared so out of place at an altitude of 10,000 meters.
"Finally reached!"