I'm planning to write a novel. I've written the prologue, but since this is my first time writing, I don't have any formal training or background in literature. I'd like to get some feedback and see how people respond to the prologue. I would appreciate it if you could read it, give me suggestions, and rate it.

I have provided the link to the map of this world. This map is temporary and will be changed later on. I'll keep updating the map as we progress further in the story.

MAP: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1BR1mPrFSQTrXTqiIMg7CCTvyccZdUyBL/view?usp=sharing