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On the other side, after Zhang Fan left the hall, he stood alone in the courtyard. A sudden gust of night wind blew past him, jolting him from his earlier stupor.
What did I just do?
Why was he feeling jealous over a woman he had never even met? Why had he made such a fool of himself?
As he reflected on his actions in the hall, a deep regret settled in his heart. He couldn't understand why the composure he usually prided himself on had become so fragile lately. First, he had been upset about not being promoted to True Inheritance, and now he was envious of Gu Zhenzhuan holding a young girl in his arms. And to top it all off, he had lost his temper in public and been kicked out.
"Zhang Fan, what has happened to you lately?" he chastised himself. "Have you forgotten how to maintain your composure during important events?"
He felt a sense of self-reproach. His intention had been to make a good impression on Elder Cangming, but instead, he had ended up in this embarrassing situation. Determined to make amends, he turned back toward the hall.
However, as he looked back at the brightly lit main hall, he could faintly hear the laughter and lively chatter of the guests, mingling with Gu Zhenzhuan's presence. It felt so out of place compared to his own desolation.
"That's it!" he thought. "This place doesn't belong to me! Besides, going back in after being kicked out would only turn me into a laughingstock."
Shaking his head, he turned to leave.
Yet, as he walked away, a profound emptiness settled in his heart, as if something precious was slipping away from him.
After Zhang Fan departed, a moment later, a loud voice echoed through the courtyard.
"The Seventh Princess of the Tai'an Dynasty is here!"
The announcement sent shockwaves through the hall. Many warriors, who had been drinking and enjoying themselves, suddenly stood up in surprise.
"The Seventh Princess?"
"Is she really here?"
Curiosity piqued, the crowd parted as a girl entered the hall.
Dressed in a flowing blue gown, she was stunningly beautiful, her presence radiant under the moonlight. She resembled a fairy, as if she could take flight to the Moon Palace at any moment, making every woman present feel a pang of envy.
Gu Zhenzhuan's gaze fell upon her, surprise flashing in his eyes.
"What a beautiful woman!" he thought.
He had encountered many beautiful women before—both Su Lianyue and Zhao Chan had their own charms. Yet, this girl surpassed them in both beauty and the unique aura she exuded.
If Zhao Chan was like a delicate orchid blooming quietly, and Su Lianyue had a gentle, yet commanding presence reminiscent of an Empress, then this girl was like a proud phoenix, radiating an aloof confidence.
Indeed, this woman had exceptional qualities.
[Name]: Ling Baishuang
[Realm]: Three Stages of Tongxuan Realm
[Fate]: Taiyin Bloodline (Gold), Alluring Country and City (Gold)
[Number of Fate]: Divine Phoenix Remnant Soul (Gold), Daughter of Destiny (Gold), Pure Nature (Purple), No Dust (Purple)
[Life Script]: (The heroine of "Mortal Cultivation Biography")
[Favorability]: 15
[Recent Turning Point]: After half a month, she entered the mysterious realm of Xuanyuan and obtained the Fengqi Guqin, which contained a strand of the remnant soul of the true phoenix. With its help, she stimulated the remnant soul within her body and gained the inheritance of the divine phoenix.
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A full four gold attributes, plus two purple!
The dazzling light filled Gu Xuan's eyes, overwhelming him with its brilliance.
He quickly read through the introduction:
[Taiyin Bloodline]: With the Taiyin bloodline, one is born with the power of the Taiyin attribute, allowing them to exert far greater strength than ordinary people. Progress in cultivating the Taiyin attribute is also significantly accelerated.
[Alluring Country and City]: An unmatched beauty, captivating and enchanting to all.
[True Divine Phoenix Soul]: The body contains the remnant soul of an ancient Divine Phoenix, capable of commanding its might.
[Daughter of Heaven's Destiny]: A destined individual, favored by the heavens.
[Purely Rely on Nature]: Naturally formed and pure-hearted, loved since childhood, with a straightforward mind that allows for a deeper comprehension of the Dao and easier access to epiphanies.
[Does Not Stain with Dust]: A body as pure as colored glass, flawless and transparent both inside and out.
After absorbing all this information, Gu Xuan could only marvel at the fact that she was indeed the Seventh Princess of the dynasty—a true daughter of destiny!
The level of her fate was simply terrifying.
"Ling Baishuang, I have seen Elder Cangming!"
While Gu Xuan was observing in silence, Ling Baishuang stepped into the hall and bowed to Elder Cangming, who was seated at the head of the table.
"Xiao Qi has arrived; please take a seat!" Elder Cangming said warmly, a smile spreading across his face.
He gestured for her to sit on his left side. Once she was settled, Elder Cangming planned to introduce her to the others.
However, before he could speak, Ling Baishuang's beautiful eyes turned to Gu Xuan. "You must be Gu Zhenzhuan of the Holy Land of Absolute Beginning?"
"Gu Xuan, at your service, Your Highness," he replied with a slight smile and a nod.
"I've heard that Gu Zhenzhuan is quite skilled in swordsmanship. Coincidentally, I have some matters that require your assistance. Would you be interested?" Ling Baishuang asked, her eyes sparkling with enthusiasm.
At this unexpected proposition, Gu Xuan's expression shifted to one of astonishment.