Hello everyone, happy to meet you again. I'm new and this is my first work. I think I'm not doing well, maybe writing way or story.
Please, please, please,
Comment what you think about the story.
Is the story somewhat good, is the writing way Good or need improvement.
If my work is lacking, please do comment in what way it is, I'll make sure to improve my work.
Thank you for your support.
Please, do comment, it motivates me to work even better and harder.