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glitchtale (rewrite)

TheLooker_17
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frisk, a 12 year old child, is going to his hiding place called 'Mount ebbot' he really doesn't go deep much at all, but today was different, he wanted to explore his hiding place a bit more, and ended up climbing on it.
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Chapter 1 - chapter one

One day, on a dark, long night, a kid named frisk climbs Mount ebbot, its his usual hiding place when somthig goes wrong amd he needs time to himself.

Frisk never went up the mountain because he thought he couldn't climb down the mountain, and screaming for his parents would've been embarrassing.

Out of curiosity, frisk starts go climb the mountain, after ten minutes, he finds a surface he can walk on, an extremely dusty place, with alot of vines inside, there, he finds a hole, he walks up to it and throws a rock inside.

Nothing but silence stared back at him.

He got bored and decided to leave, but he couldn't move his legs, he looks at his leg, only to see the vines holding on to it tightly.

"No no no no no... what am I gonna do... oh!" Frisk mumbles to themselfs "I'm going to cut these vines with this sharp rock on the ground I have, not like its going to-"

The floor crumbled where he stood, hanging on tightly to the rocks on the sides of the hole.

Suddenly, the vines started to pull Frisk down the hole, he struggled to go stay on top, but alas, the vines dragged him down inside the hole.

He falls on a bed of flowers, which broke his fall.

"...where... am I?" Frisk says, confused about his surroundings.

Frisk stands up and walks to the only place where there is any sort of hallway, it was all pitch black, the walls were black and the place was dark.

Frisk walks in a roomwith a patch of grass, with a hole on top of it which gave it sunlight, he walks near it, only to be surprised as a flower with a face popped out of it!

"Howdy!" The flower says to frisk "I'm flowey, flowey the flower!"

"Wha- frisk trys to say before getting cut off.

"Your new to the underground, arentcha?" Flowey states with a happy smile on its face "golly, you must be so confused!"

"I outta teach you how things work around here!" Flowey says as somthig apears on frisks chest, resembling a heart.

"WHAT IS GOING ON HERE!?" Frisk yells as they start to sit and tear up "WHAT IS THIS!?"

Some flower petals start to appear around Flowey, frisk looks even more confused and shaken up as a result.

"These are friendliness petals!" Flowey replys to frisk "let them touch you, it's going to heal those scratches of yours!"

Frisk, doubting the authenticity of floweys words, avoids all the 'friendliness petals'.

Flowey starts to get angry, and throws even more petals at frisk.

"JUST TOUCH THE DAMN BU-" flowey screams before cutting themselfs off "I mean friendliness petals..."

"NO!" Frisk yells at flowey "I just met you, why should I trust you at all!?"

"You're a talking flower for crying out loud!" Frisk screams at flowey in anger.

"..." flowey stares quietly at frisk.

"You know what's going on here, don't you?" Flowey says in a sinister tone, forming a distorted face in the process.

"What?" Frisk stares at flowey, confused about what they just said.

"I guess I don't have to put up any stupid acts anymore" flowey mumbles to them self as they completely surround frisk with the petals.

Frisk starts to frantically look around him for a way to escape or survive these petals, he doesn't know what they do, for all he know they could cut him in half or have deadly poison in them.

As they petals get uncomfortably close to frisk, fire is suddenly thrown at flowey, removing all the petals in the process.

Frisk starts to breath heavily, due to stress of the situation that just happened.

"Oh, my poor child, what kind of sick creature would do such a thing..." a tall, humanoid goat lady, wearing what resemble a bland, purple dress with a symbol in the middle.

"W-who are you!?" Frisk crys as they start to back up, afraid of what she might try to do.

"I'm toriel, caretaker of the ruins, let's go to my home, you can rest there as long as you want!" Toriel says with a kind, happy tone as she lends her hands to frisk.

"...o-ok" Frisk says, hesitantly grabbing her hand as he stands up.

Toriel and frisk walk into a room built with pink bricks, and a broken fountain in the middle, they walk around, toriel helping him solve puzzles as they go.

Toriel tells frisk to go in alone as she runs off to the end of a very long hallway, a very, very long hallway, as soon as she does so, she disappeared.

Frisk, fearing somthing would pop up out of no where, immediately runs as fast as he can, ten minutes later, he is at the end of the

Hallway.

As he's about to get out of the opening in the wall, totiel pops out of a conveniently placed pillar near the wall.

She explains to him that it was just an independence test to see how well he would do alone, she gave him a cell phone and told him to wait for 10 minutes, and she would be back as soon as possible.

He's to afraid however, as soon as she was out of site, he starts going forward, after some time, he met a ghost named napstablook which he became friends with.

After a while, he reaches toriels home as he gets a phone call from her.

"Are you OK my child!? Are you hurt!?" Toriel says heavily worried about frisk coming alone.

"I-im OK..." Frisk hesitantly replied.

"That's good to hear... let's go inside, my child" toriel says, relieved that frisk is safe.

They go inside, she shows frisk his bedroom.

Frisk, extremely tired after the insanity that was this day, faints on the bed, 5 hours later, he wakes up, in a frenzy.

as he gets off of bed, he sees a photo of two kids, one was a human that looked like him, but with a green striped t-shirt instead, and a kid that looked like toriel, who was wearing a green shirt with yellow stripes.

He gets off of bed and sees a pie, he is very hungry, so he eats it before leaving the room.

He leaves the room in stress after remembering some important things that a due, he runs to toriel as fast as he can, and says:

"H-H-HEY UUHHHH....TORIEL?" Frisk says in alot of stress "H-H-HOW DO I GET O-OUT OF THE R-RUINS? THERES STILL MUCH I HAVE TO DO ON THE SURFACE!"

"Your going to be just fine here, don't worry, my child!" Toriel replies as she continues reading her book.

"Y-you don't understand...super important things coming up that I have to finish, I need to leave as soon as possible..."Frisk replies back, trying to convince her so he can leave.

"Stay here, my child, I have to go and do somthing..." toriel says with a small, but visible frown on her face.

Toriel stands up from her chair and goes to what looks like a basement door, frisk follows her to see what she's doing.

"You want to leave the ruins... sorry my child, I can't let that happen" toriel looks at frisk in an intimidating way "I have lost far too many children to let that happen..."

"*Asgore*... he won't let you leave, nor survive" toriel says as she looks away from frisk and continues walking down the hallway.

Frisk looks at toriel with confusion and slight fear, he doesn't want to die, but he doesn't want to live here either.

"But I have to go!" Frisk mumbles to himself.

"*He* needs *seven* souls to break the barrier, he already has *six* souls" toriel says with tears in her face

They arrive in a room with one, big door with no other way around, toriel stands in frisks way of potential freedom, toriel trys to talk, but hesitates, then, finally.

"If you want to leave the ruins, you'll have to prove your self" toriel says as he hands are surrounded by fire.

Toriel starts to throw flames in many directions, more specifically near frisk.

Frisk dodges most of them, but some hits land, leading to other hits landing.

Three minutes later, and frisk hasn't even tried raising his arms to hit her.

"Why... why aren't you fighting back?" Toriel tells frisk as she slows down shooting her flames.

Frisk starts to feel his head getting lighter, he feels less conscious by the second, after 10 seconds of not responding, he falls face flat on the floor.

"...f-frisk?!" Toriel yells as she runs to frisks body.

Tbc next chapter (next chapter will be simplifing undertles story, then get into the Jucy stuff later)