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Chapter 17 - Not a Chapter- Just a Question

Hello all you beautiful souls.

I have a quick announcement as well as a question.

First, there will be no chapters on Sunday and Tuesday as this weekend my lovey Wife and I are celebrating our 5th year anniversary!!! ❤️

So i will post a chapter Wednesday and Friday instead. I usually post 3 chaps a week, but this coming week will only be 2.

This leads me to my question.

This book was doing really well 2 weeks ago, and it even got in the low 400s in power stones which absolutely blew my mind.

But now, im only at the high 100s, and the little graph thing it shows me, is telling me that im not getting as many veiws as well. This dip started happening on the chapter that i introduced Kharath and the small bit of chaos into the story, so my question is this.

Do you think it was a mistake for me to introduce Chaos, and if so, what would you have done differently?

I ask this out of pure curiosity, and not because i plan to rewrite anything. My plan was always to introduce chaos like i did, and i still 100% plan on continuing down the path im on.

Im just curious! Thank you so much for reading, and i hope you have a wonderful day!

I appreciate each and every single one of you!