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Chapter 28 - When the Lonely Depart? all that remains...

Certainly, here's an expanded and more emotional version of the scene. I've woven in Aelorin's internal thoughts, along with more descriptive language to add depth and poignancy to his departure and Shayla's confinement.

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Shayla led the way through the narrow, rugged path, her strides confident and unhurried, while Aelorin trailed behind, stumbling slightly. He felt lifeless, his eyes hollow, lips parted in a dazed stupor. The remnants of his pride had scattered like ash in the wind, and he had no idea how to grasp what was left of his manhood—literally.

Shayla threw a glance over her shoulder, noticing his slumped posture, and a wry smile tugged at the corners of her mouth. "You should be happy. At least you've got something between your legs now," she quipped, a mischievous glint lighting up her eyes.

Her nonchalance stung. She hadn't just taken his powers; she'd obliterated the very core of his identity. "Thank you, for making me feel... useless," he muttered in a barely-there voice, sounding like he'd crawled out of a grave.

"You're welcome," she replied, unperturbed, her tone all mock cheer.

Aelorin couldn't decide if he despised her or admired her resilience. **Not even a flicker of sympathy. You really are a devil,** he thought bitterly.

As they journeyed deeper into the dark path, the scenery morphed, becoming eerie and desolate. Cracks splintered the rocky walls, jagged and raw, and the ground bore scorch marks and deep gouges as if some ancient battle had scarred it. His brow furrowed. "It's like a war zone here," he murmured, eyeing the damage.

Shayla's voice cut through his musings. "Not exactly a war zone. This destruction? It's from the first person who came here by chance. And no, it wasn't when they trapped me here. I was too weak to fight back then."

"The first person?" Aelorin echoed, his curiosity piqued.

She nodded, her face softening with the shadow of a memory. "Yes. A master of magic. He fell down that same drop you did—but unlike you, he landed without a scratch."

Aelorin's eyes roamed the battered landscape with a newfound reverence. **This destruction... these footprints, the marks of lunge and recoil...** He could almost picture it—the clash, the power, the raw intensity of two forces colliding. His breath quickened with the thrill of it. **One day, I want to have battles like this...**

"He created the exit from this prison," Shayla added, her voice tinged with a strange warmth. "I couldn't leave because of my binding, but he… he brought light here."

Aelorin stole a sidelong glance at her, caught off guard by the vulnerability he glimpsed beneath her stoic facade. For a brief moment, her gaze seemed far away, softened by something that felt like longing.

"Shayla, do you think..." he paused, swallowing back the childish hope swelling in his chest. "Could I ever be as strong as you? Or even surpass you?"

Her eyes sparkled with something close to fondness as she considered him. "Of course you can. Maybe even more, if you train hard enough," she replied gently. "Besides, I'll be giving you a parting gift when we get to the exit."

A parting gift? The idea both excited and unsettled him. **What could a devilish spirit like her possibly offer me?** he wondered. But he didn't question it further; he only nodded, rubbing his hands together to ease the dryness from the dark cavern air.

Then, almost hesitantly, he asked, "Shayla, why are you helping me? You have nothing to gain, and… don't you ever get tired of being here alone? Don't you want to escape?"

His question left her silent for a long moment, the weight of it settling between them. Finally, she released a slow, weary sigh. "I have my reasons," she murmured, her voice barely a whisper. "I want to atone for everything I've done. And yes, I'm tired—so tired of this prison. I want to see the outside world again. But more than that… I want to be someone new. To live again."

Aelorin's heart clenched. Her words echoed in his mind, raw and unshielded. "Then, I swear to you," he began, his voice wavering with conviction, "when I become strong enough, I'll find a way to set you free from this place. Even if it takes a hundred years."

She looked at him, and for the first time, her expression softened to a genuine smile. "I'll be waiting for that day, Aelorin."

They walked on in silence until they reached a wall at the end of the path—a large, jagged hole blown open in the rock. Beyond it lay an endless forest, brimming with green life and golden sunlight that cast an otherworldly glow. Aelorin stopped at the threshold, marveling at the sight. The warmth of sunlight touched his face, a stark contrast to the cold, dim depths of the prison, and his heart surged with newfound freedom.

"This is it," Shayla said, her voice almost too steady. She reached out and gave him a firm shove, her final act half-heartedly disguised as a joke. "Go on, Aelorin. And try to make plenty of babies while you're at it!"

Her humor was painfully ill-timed, and he turned back, resisting the urge to laugh and cry all at once. A part of him wanted to step out into the light, but another part wanted to stay and find a way to drag her with him.

But he knew he couldn't.

He felt an ache settle in his chest—a profound sadness that someone as strong, as enigmatic as Shayla, would remain bound in the shadows, hidden from the world's beauty. As he looked back, he could see the faintest hint of longing in her gaze, like she, too, was clinging to the last moments of their shared journey.

He raised a hand in farewell. "I'll return, Shayla. Even if it takes a century, I'll find a way."

She simply nodded, her eyes never leaving his as he took his final step through the crack in the wall, sunlight washing over him, filling him with warmth and purpose. He breathed deeply, taking in the forest air that felt heavy with life. **I'll come back for you,** he vowed silently.

But when he turned to look back, she was gone. The path, the crack, all of it had vanished as if it had never existed. In its place stood an unbroken mountainside, ancient and immovable.

He staggered forward, his mind racing, his hand reaching out to the solid wall in disbelief. He ran his fingers over the rough stone, hoping he could somehow break through the illusion, reach through to the other side.

"Thank you, Shayla," he murmured, his voice catching in his throat. "I'll keep my promise. I'll show you the outside world again."

Suddenly, a gentle glow enveloped him, and a notification appeared before his eyes:

{You have received a Gift from Shayla}

{Would you like to access this gift?}

With a final glance back at the mountainside, he nodded, and in that quiet, resolute moment, he made a vow to himself—and to her. **I'll become someone who can set you free, Shayla. I swear it.**

And as he stepped into the forest, the echoes of her laughter, her strength, and her sorrow followed him, lingering like a shadow, a haunting reminder of the devil he would never forget.