Asimbonge_Fifa

Loyd, Takehiko, Maki and everybody else is worried when Kevin disappears for a while.

Meanwhile Kevin is at the Triquilas mansion to train and master using two swords.

After readinc a few chapters, there are few problems. Please put some comma, so I can stop and processed the info. Also the make it like a paragraph each and not making it as a whole since it kind of hard to read. Thats just about it, the story had some potential.

Keep up the good work Author

A potential plot with little bit of refinement needed in the writing and grammar part. I like the theme of four swords. Keep working, Good luck 👍

The novel is nice and actually enjoyable  although there are grammatical errors that needs corrections

I think it's great but I don't think the idea of four swords slaying trinity beasts matches like we know trinity means three it's just a little off
But amazing work

It's good but they're some grammatical errors actually like "it" instead of "eat"
Also you keep switching between present and past tense.
And maybe just do a general cross check before posting
Solid💜

it's a good novel the writing is good and the characters a good

You're doing great, keep it up. You've got me hinged

This book has great potential, I really recommend it.

The writting quality is good, but you should make shorter paragraphs so that we don't end up skipping some details.

Read till chapter 3! This has big potential! A great start and great chapter 1, all in all its really a nice novel ^^)/ keep up author nim!!!

can you review my novel also that name is

Chronicles of the Lost World

The concept of the story itself is interesting and something very original that I have never read before. The writing quality is simple and easy to understand but kind of hard to read on the phone because of the long continuous paragraph and unseparated dialogue and narration. The synopsis can be improved as well to catch the attention of more readers. Also, I'm suggesting to make a more attractive book cover. Try using some image generator AI app. It's free.

A good story overall. I love the world building and character development. Keep it up

The four swords master