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Why..... Why. As the heavy wall crashed my body and broking my bones I saw them. My father head being cutting. My mother humiliated in front of me and for my little twins brother they became a meat for their dogs. As I saw all my family members head being cut and made a wall from them I saw them with smile on their face broken every micro of my own humanity and turn to nothing. As the evil take over with the fire of rage for revenge over every thing and everyone
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Chapter 1 - Chapter 1 First step to hell part 1

Alfons Hicks.Tall male with 25 years known as the smartest doctor that ever exists.

Merried Emma Carlina Phoenix.

The smartest scientist who created The Golden Blood and the Artificial Organs.

Looking to his wife.

He couldn't breathe as her looking was breath taking.

Long silky smooth hair with red-brown color and yellow eyes like refined gold, her long white dress resembled the color of her skin as white as snow. Her appearance was like an angel with golden eyes and reddish-brown hair.

Emma said in a happy voice and tears.

" Now we can be together my love "

Looking to his wife the husband forgot everything for the first time in his life. And didn't know what to say?

" yes... my love "

This words make him lose all his control of his emotions he grabbed her hand carefully he hold her like holding a thin glass.

Putting his hand on her face, she did the same. He says with shaking voice.

" I'm... Alfons one of the Hicks family .... I will make sure you still happy and save as long as I'm alive "

She replied with hugging him and a red embarrassed face.

" I'm.... Emma one of the Phoenix family .... I will stand with you against your enemies ... I will be in love with you alone... Even if we have children I will love you alone and never leave your side even in death.... We will die together "

Hugging her back he say with loud voice so everyone can hearing.

" This is my wife one of Hicks family. If anyone try to speak or touch her without my permission then he better long for death as non can make him away from Hicks family hands "

Grabbing her hand and hug her with force Emma brain become stupidly in love.

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After 1 year

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Emma gave birth to the weakest child in the history of the Hicks family.

Alfons prevented his wife from seeing her newborn son fearing for her mental and physical condition. As he knows she will blaming herself for it since her bloodline is weaker than his.

Emma looked at her husband's face while he was worried about her baby.

She said while bearing the pain in a sad and soft voice.

" dear is he a boy? "

He replied as he kissed her hand and wiped his hand on her cheek and happy tears coming out of his eyes.

" Yes, honey, he's a boy and And he is in good health now please take some rest "

She looked at her husband face and said with gentle smile.

" Dear... his name will be Kartos "

Smiling with sweet smile and cold evil voice

" Darling if you change the name of our son I'm going to stab you in the heart again. Am I clear? "

The husband look at her face.

Bow to her and kissed her on the forehead and said

" Don't worry, my love, he's part of the Hicks family, and our son "

" Thank you... I love you...."

Emma looked at her husband and drowning in her love. falling asleep while showing a happy smile

" You really now how to treat your woman right. Don't you. My dearest son "

The person who said that was an old man with an athletic body. And a white long beard and hair. The head of the Hicks family known as a Demon Hands. Looked at his son with worried face.

Alfons look to the old man with angry aura coming from his body and says

" Father my son is weak... He have the mixed blood of the lesser family "

" That is not how I raised you my dear boy you better behave when you talk to your father "

A beautiful young Lady with black long hair and green eyes, a white skin like a ghost. appears from the void walking to him.

Alfons look to the muscler man and the beauty lady in front of him and say with sad voice trying to stop his tears

" Mother. Father..... My son... I can't loss him... Please help me. "

The old man huge him and say with claim voice

" It's Okay my son. We are here for you. All the members of the family are coming to see my grandson so don't afraid we all going to help you "

After a few minutes all the hospital becomes full of Hicks members. The older the younger the children and kids all are happy to meet the new member.

In Hicks family no one care about money, fame or talent all they care about is one thing and always will be to protect all members of the family, and if you couldn't do that you will get the middle name the ( X ) as it means you are a member of the family but not welcoming to anyone and you will be treated like an insect that must be disposed of.

Alfons mother said with happy face to him

" honey since we allI here can you tell us his name "

Alfons says with smile on his face

" Kartos....his name is Kartos "

The woman smiles and looked at her husband and said

" darling I guess you finally meet him "

Reply with happy experiences

" Yes my love.... I guess we don't need to worry about this anymore "

Alfons look to his father wanting to ask him as he grab his grandsons and say to the new born with happy face

" Hello little hero. I'm your grandpa Kiros you are one of us so everything is good to be fine okay. My dear little boy Kartos Hicks "

" father what you mean by that.... What are you planning to do with my child? "

Kiros give his wife Kartos. As she carried her grandson with happy tears coming from her eyes.

She said.

" Hello my sweet.... Sweet grandson, I'm your grandmother Elka, welcome to the family now "

Kiros put his hand on his wife's shoulder and said in a sad voice

" My love it's okay. You know what we have to do "

Alfons looked at his father and said suspiciously

" Dad, what do you mean? Don't tell me you want to put him in the white world "

Kiros looked at his son with anger and sigh while he explaining to him everything about the hidden secrets of Kartos name meaning.

" now you understand what we have to do?"

Alfons replied

" Yes I understand that .. But does that mean my wife.... Is she a spy or something? "

Elka and Kiros looking to each other they and laughed saying

" Oh my.... Of course not dear sweetheart... she is pure "

" But you did great. She really fallen for your love I never see a woman in love like that "

Alfons reply with smile looking to the face of his wife.

" I just give her what she never had "

Kiros looked at Kartos face and said

" You know what his fate will be... if we save him now. He will be.... No he is going through hell or probably worse "

Alphonse looked at his son's face and said

" Dad..... I'm a father now, please don't take my son away from me."

" I get it.... This is also the father duty "

" this is my first gift to my grandson "

Alka took out a bottle with crimson liquid and said with loud voice to everyone

" We will save the weak among us, but one day we all going to die while he is trying to save us. If anyone wants us to let our new member die.... If anyone wants to the child to die.... And so if you do you want to save him or accept the name of X ? "

Everyone looked at each other and started whispering for few minutes.

And then everyone went out to the hospital garden and said with one loud voice.

" For God sick let the child live "

" if we die we'll die together no matter what "

Alphonse looked at the family members and replied with crying face.

" Thank you for saving my son .... Thank you very much everyone.... I'm happy to have you all at my said "

Looking to his father he saw him opening the bottle of liquid and pouring it on the ground saying.

" Death judge. Hicks is calling you. As you have deal must fulfill. "

Fill the room with black smoke as it was thick like clouds. Advancing from within the clouds was a terrifying entity looked like a skeleton covered in rotten flesh and dirty cloth. The beast looked at Kiros and said with a voice similar to the clash of iron swords.

## Where is Hicks?... why don't I see him here? #

Kiros came forward to the beast and said as he took out his aura.

" I am the heir of the hero Hicks and the second president after him."

The beast looked at Kiros and started laughing lightly as he said

" I see... So it seems that even he could not overcome his inevitable fate. Now As the contract between me and the hero stipulated I will grant you one wish. What is your desire? "

Kiros looked at his son and said

" It's up to you son "

" Give my son a strong body "

The monster reply with happy voice

" As you wish but you know the price for this wish "

" I know and we all ready for that "

## I see so the son of Hicks I'm going to give your new born son a strong body and his fate will be hell itself ##

## now you all have to leave this child alone with me so I can fix his mixed bloodline ##

Kiros looked at his son and said

" come one son help me to get your mother before she kill our last hope"

Alphonse looked at his mother as she wanted to cut the monster in half.

He grabbed her from her hand as a gentleman and says.

" the lady should not cut the grass with her beautiful hands"

Kicking him from the back kiros says with angry face.

" stop her you fool. not stealing her from me you little brat."

Elka. Laugh slightly with softly voice.

" Ara Ara... My husband is jealous of his son"

Holding her hands he says

" of course I am. You don't know that but he looks handsome because of your genes."

The lady face become red and hide her embarrassing by hugging her husband and reply

" I love you... I love you I love you I love you I love you I love you I love you I love you I love you I love you I love you I love you "

She become like a broken recorder keeps saying " I love you " over and over.

Kiros smile with happy evil joyfully face to his son and laught at him. Saying.

" let's go my love "

She replied with heart in her eyes.

" yes my darling "

Alfons carried the bed that Emma was sleeping on it and says with his lips

" my sleeping princess "

Kiros feel angry as he never have the opportunity to carried his wife like a princess

" little brat "

As always the son and father started Compare between their love and who is the best gentleman.

As stupid it is look but every men and women are stupid when it's come to love as they forget to serious of their situation

After the Alfons went with Emma out of the room. Kiros carried his wife like princess and told her with red face.

" Sorry for making you wait my love but I'm slowly at this stuff... Please don't get angry"

Elka. Reply with serious face.

" I want new son now"

Standard still the old man looks to his wife with her young beautiful face like a teenager girl and her red shy face. Kiros as a man could not stop the mountain of Everest.

Round Elka said.

" dealing your belt is hitting me"

" that is not my belt "

Taking his wife out Kirk's look to the monsters and use all his full powers to send 1 massage to him

" IF MY GRANDSON CRY. YOU ARE DEAD. WOMAN"

After his leave the door of the room closed on itself

The monster talk to himself

## He is really you son Hicks as he can see from my magic ##

## What an interesting family ##

" Now let's start to work "

The monster speak with a sweet voice of beautiful woman and says

.. Deactivate disguise magic ..

The horrible creature transformed to a teenager girl wearing military outfit with a black wings from her back.

She says to the new born child in front of her some unknown spells .

" ∆Π¶Π¶Π∆Π "

" ∆∆Π∆Π∆∆ΠΠ "

" calling you all mighty God give this child a strong body "

A tall skeleton put his hand around the girl and she disappeared with last message from her to him as she smiled with screaming eyes looking towards him.

## If you survive this. I hope you don't make my girl cry or I'm going to hunt your soul. X Hicks ##

after the girl disappear

A screen show in front of the sleeping child says with ropotic voice of young girl.

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" Detect a fraction of the immortal beast and the Holy immortal monster "

" All conditions have been met start to sing in the system "

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" Welcome to the original system "

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" Notification "

" New user to the original system "

" User number is (0) "

" All services is available do to the reword of the first user "

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"error error error error error error "

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" You have the body of the immortal beast and the holy immortal monster "

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" error the soul of your body can't regenerate energy enough to survive "

" the life of the user is in danger "

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" error the user can't do anything about it star the program #### "

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" failed, do to a passive skill linked to the soul of the user "

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" start to consume all mana in the plant "

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" failed do to age of user "

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" start to use all energy of the system to survive the soul "

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" success, now the soul have enough energy "

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" notify "

" The system energy is (- 100%) "

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" start to recharge by the mana of user Time until 100% charge is "

" 10y:00m:00w:00d:00h:00m:00s "

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After 5 long years

Location

The house of Alfons hicks

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Kartos Alfons Hicks live happy normal life. He though he is most lucky kid in the world. To get a happy lovely parents and members of the family loves and helping each other. The kid never know heat never become selfish or spoiled. All what he diser was to live his life in the Hicks family as always.

Days in and out. Kartos become smarter than his own mother and father he learn all languages and understand every single book at the family library.

But no one know that except his grandparents.

As his grandfather saw him creating life healing potion which was the highest form of elixir. every time he going in and out of the family library with books.

One day the grandparents ask him why he hidden his Genius.

He replied with sad empty eyes.

" I don't want to be alone... I want to help my family but not to lose them.... I need to learn everything to protect this gift as I'm never going to have it again."

The little kid still standing alone with sad emotions feel lonely and cold of the winter air in his empty eyes. Then a worming sensation followed to him bringing his eyes back to life.

As Elka hugs her grandson with gentle smile and kiss his face saying

" My sweet heart please don't show me that face or your grandma will cry."

A tear come out of her eyes makes him crying like baby. The kid crying and apologize for her telling her not to cry, telling her to forgive him as he going to be better

In that moment Kiros. Looking at his grandson realize that Kartos know and understand the beauty of his family, happiness and forgiveness he do understand them and know them but he doesn't know the evil behind humanity. He do not know how much evil can exist. Just for 1 gold coin. How far humans can kill for 1 Dimond.

After he say goodbye to his grandson.

Kiros looked at his wife and said with a serious face

" Honey we need to find out a friend for him "

She replied with cold voice

" Are you thinking of ex-criminal or the white world. "

He still a kid so let's find out a kid in the same age with horrible parents and garbage family or a fallen one if he killed them for survival that we'll be great for his growt."

" I will contact all of our members. "

After 5 years

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Kartos' perspective

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I was bored and looked at my mother as she always enjoyed preparing poisoned food.

So I asked her a question that Maybm save me from her deadly cooking.

" Mom, how did you marry, father? "

I ask with soft innocent voice. I do know the answer but my intention was to make her run to work without giving us God know whatever the dark matter used to be.

She reply with red and embarrassing face.

" Yyyyou stilllll small honey. "

I look nervously at my father face and says in Morse Code.

' Play along with me or eat her food your choice '

My dad looks at me and says

" Son I know you handsome with deadly cool face but please don't steal my love. "

Reply to my father.

" Father please tell me I want to know how did you get a cute girl like mother. "

My father acting happy and reply with cool look in his face

" Well son me and your mother married because of a simple bet "

I asked again.

" Oh and what it was the bet?, my cool handsome father. "

He reply With raising nose

" Who going to burn the house first."

Look at my father face with disappointment and telling him with dead eyes.

" Oh... So who wins my dear father."

He try to replied, but my mother show up from my father back with evil scary smile trying to Warning him she said

" Oh my.. Oh my.... Ara Ara Ara .... My dear husband and my handsome son trying to run from breakfast again "

" oh my weak heart, I guess I should cook specially food today.....so you two may enjoy my food. "

My father whisper

" the hell if that is food_"

A frying pan hitting my father head knocked him in the floor with blood from his head and with sweet voice. She said.

" Sorry my love but there was some dead cells in your skull and I want to remove them."

Touch his head he replied with bowing head to floor.

" I'M VERY SORRY MY LOVE WE LOOKING FOR YOU FOOD All MIGHTY CHIEF."

Follow his act i bow and says

" All HAIL THE GREAT CHIEF. "

Me and my father lose our skin color as we could see The Grim Reaper standing behind my mother and smiling to us with his big sharp scythe.

We as gentlemen did the only thing we know in a situation like this.

We run.

We run from the kitchen to find that the door was locked.

We tried to call ambulance but there was no phone signal. With all my force I grabbed the iron chair and hit it with all my strength to break the window, but no use for it.

Looking at my father I said.

" Shelter protocols."

My father grab his glasses and cleaned them and replied with happy voice

" I guess we should expect our fate."

Grabbing my father from the shir I scream at him with anger

## I do . But not like that. Are you okay with dying from unknown oil or God knows whatever her cooking called? ##

He screaming in hysterical way.

## I'm all for it. If I die I will die as a man as a brave man. ##

He answered with serious face and heavy breathing. Slapping him multiple times I tell him

" I'm not going to die today because of you. Father I'm still 10 years you better find away out or I'm going to tell mom about what you up to__"

Hearing her voice calling for us she screaming.

" Honey... Dear.... I finished the breakfast..where are you two."

Looking to each other we shaking our hands and say goodbye to life. Seating down like a gentleman faceing the horror of Hicks females food.

We saw a dark black liquid covering a raw meat for me. As for father it was worse as it was a burning coal with brown liquid like Bull residues, and there was eyeball floating in the liquid.

Looking to each other I tried to stap my self in the eyes but my mother didn't give us any forks or knife only spoons.

Cry with happiness we look to each other and start a ghost conversation between son and father

' What in the hell is this that .'

' I don't know and don't want to know. '

' Dad why you fall in love with a sycophant yandere who can do everything except cooking there is no logic in that.'

' Well all our conversations is not logical itself. Stop being picky and try to eat whatever you mother cooked it's must be healthy.... I hope. '

' You hoping to... There is no way you making me eating this dark substance.'

' Your mother is pregnant with twins you're going to be big brother. '

' Say no more good sir I'm going to eat this shit. '

After I took 1 bite I see the white all mighty god tell me to come and stay in heaven.

I was Unconscious but the moment I smiled that horrible smiles I wake up to face the nightmare.

Looking at my mother which was using her aura to feeding my father

Bleeding form his eyes and ears my father says

" My... Princess.... Yo... Your cooking is.... Divine."

Looking at my dying father I bow to him with respect and serious face saying

" Rest in peace father I will take care of mother. "

## hell nah ##

My father grabbed the raw steak and put it in my mouth forcing me to eat it when I swallowed it. I swear I heard an ropotic voice of young girl telling me

∆∆ Do to unknown mana food cooking. all the power is recharged ∆∆

∆∆ starting all system services in 30 seconds ∆∆

Pulling myself together I grabbed my father food and put it his mouth making him test a piece of his medicine

I feel nauseous so I threw up on the floors and my father put his hand on my shoulder. I swear I thought he will help me or feeling sorry, or even apologize but my old man. Decide to threw up on my face looking at him with anger

" WHY ME ? "

" Ehh... Ha.. AHa.. Sorry kiddo but I can't throwing on my beautiful princess...and you will washing yourself anyway so what is the big deal."

I head to the Sinak cleaning myself with water and soap and after I cleaned up.

The ground below us start to shaking. I fall to the ground and heard a loud sound of lightning storms appear from nowhere . looking at the windows I saw a black clouds loaded with thunder and lightning. I try to move but my dad moved faster then me he hugs my mother trying to make her feel save.

I close all curtains. And kick the table grabbing the knife I cut the carpet and open the hidden door.

Screaming at my father

" Dad come quickly."

My father carry my mother like princess and jump to the door like athletic.

Try to join him. But I get hit by a struck of lightning.

I knock out to falling on the door and closed it with dead body.

In that moment I was dead.

Falling in a black empty space I see some shattered piece of glass

I try to touch them but my body didn't listen to me.

After some time I was still falling.

After several minutes I wake up to see.

A man who looks like me standing up and start to talk. To the nothingness and emptiness space

# sorry my love #

# I couldn't protect you #

# I couldn't fulfilled my promise to you #

# but now I'm free my love #

# I killed them all. All races, demons, dragons, angles, elf, dwarf, humans. My love i killed the gods all of them and brings back the forgotten race the immortal beasts I became ones again the Holy Beast King I myself becomes death I... I... I'm sorry so sorry my love #

Seen the scarry man who looks like me crying tears from blood. The view of what his words meant was in front of my own eyes.

It was horrible nothing can describe it as it beyond the evil of the demon him self. In that seen there was a females get rapid by a giant pig forcing them to get pregnant and eating their new born child as food for drink they Ether drink the blood of the children or the sperm of these monsters.

I saw a men get skined alive and healing in the same time creating a circle from torture breaks the maind and soul.

As for the children I will never forget what I saw.

He makes them on drugs somehow and make them cuting themselves to feed the monsters if they like your meat they will assault them and eating them alive while they enjoy it as they on drugs crying for help or death.

he was creating hell for losing his love.

" Maybe you are right. "

Talking with myself he grabbed me from my neck and talk with cold ice voice

# why you didn't accept that system #

# because of your choice I forsed to lose her unable to save her soul unable to Revival her, just because you didn't like it. You give it to the king of humanity, and he put you in jail as thanks. He constantly rapes her, day and nights without you knowing until you get out to found her stabbed in heart because she tries to save you. Do you know how much pain I felt that time do you just know what she was to me #

I looked at him and spoke

" I'm not you.... And I don't know..... What are you... Taking about."

Looking at me with anger face he punch me and make hole through my chest.

Cough blood and trying to not to die. He broke my neck and say

# Don't forget what I said younger me #

After I die for the second time I scream and found myself on the hospital of our family with blue screen in front of me showing me a message with robotic voice

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" Notify"

" All energy and the back up energy is 100% recharged. "

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