TheDanza

 Shameless author review. Please be kind in the comments. I will happily accept constructive criticism, and I would love to hear all of your opinions. And please give me your ideas I'd love to hear them, but please, no hate comments :) 



Quite good novel. Reminds me of old good days.
Please change the names of Fiendgod  refining techniques and Realms
. They are wayy too shit and weak and pathethic for 
For one, the Technique names presented in Chapter 3 are way too weak, shit and pathethic for those names Primordial Chaos Method...Pangu's Might...Bruh, what were you smoking  when you made them....jk..but still, change them.
And Realm names, change them from Houtian and Xiantian and Jiangu or w/e to english names...it creates confusion and leaves the bad taste that this is poor work.

loving it so far, the 'plot' is great. Keep it up!                                                                                                             

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