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Chapter 4 - Prologue (4)

The biting cold wind howled, carrying flurries of black snow across the dense forest. Orcel moved through the thick undergrowth, each step a battle against the deep snow and the sharp, throbbing pain in his back. His breath came in ragged gasps, fogging the air before him, but he pressed on.

Suddenly, a low growl broke through the wind. Orcel froze, his gaze snapping toward the sound. Out from the shadows of the trees emerged a pack of wolves—dire wolves. Their massive forms moved slowly, their fur matted with blood and soot, eyes glowing faintly in the dim light of the snowstorm. They were hungry, injured, and desperate.

Orcel's heart raced. His muscles tensed, and his mind raced through his limited options. The wolves circled him slowly, limping and snarling. He could tell they were in no shape for a proper hunt—several had visible wounds, one had a leg dragging awkwardly—but they were still a danger. Orcel wasn't much better off. His wound burned with every movement, and his legs wobbled from exhaustion. He had no weapon. No way to fight.

"They're desperate," Orcel muttered under his breath, his eyes darting between the wolves.

Without a second thought, he turned and bolted into the forest, pushing his body to its limits. The wolves snarled in response, lunging after him. His feet sank deep into the snow with every step, making him stumble, but he forced himself to keep moving. He could hear the wolves' ragged breathing behind him, snapping at his heels, but their injuries slowed them down.

Orcel's lungs burned, and his vision blurred as he stumbled out onto a dirt road, barely keeping his footing. His legs gave out for a moment, but as he scrambled to his feet, the howling of the wolves seemed to grow distant. His gaze blurred from the snowstorm, but through the white veil of falling snow, a large shadow loomed ahead.

A Carriage.

Orcel waved his arms weakly, his throat too dry to call out. The carriage was moving slowly, but steadily, through the storm, and just as the wolves closed in behind him, a figure atop the carriage shouted. A volley of arrows whizzed through the air, scattering the wolves with snarls of frustration. Orcel collapsed into the snow, watching as the wolves retreated back into the forest, too weak and injured to pursue further.

The people on the carriage murmured, debating amongst themselves. Orcel could only make out bits of the conversation, but it was clear they were wary of taking a stranger aboard, especially one in such bad shape. Finally, an old man's voice broke through the noise, firm and commanding.

"We can't leave him here. He's just a boy. Look at him."

Orcel felt hands lift him gently, carrying him to the back of the carriage. A heavy cloth was draped over him to block out the biting wind, and his eyes fluttered shut from exhaustion as they placed him among the other passengers. The last thing he saw before darkness claimed him was the dim flicker of lanterns in the snowy night.

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Orcel stirred in the back of the carriage, the muffled rattling of the wheels and the gentle murmur of voices pulling him from the depths of sleep. He blinked slowly, his vision adjusting to the dim light. The cold had lessened, but his body still ached from the earlier ordeal.

His eyes drifted over the others huddled around him, trying to stay warm. A young boy sitting across from him noticed he was awake, and after a moment of hesitation, shuffled forward with a can of food in his hands.

"You're awake," the boy said softly, his eyes wide with curiosity. He held out the can to Orcel. "Here. You should eat."

Orcel stared at the boy for a moment, his mind still clouded from sleep. He didn't reach for the food immediately, and the boy shifted awkwardly, unsure of what to do. Finally, Orcel sighed and accepted the can with a nod.

"Thank you," he muttered, his voice hoarse.

The boy's face lit up with a smile as Orcel hungrily scarfed down the contents of the can. His stomach twisted in hunger, and the food, though bland, was the best thing he had tasted in days. The boy watched him with satisfaction, happy to see the stranger eating well.

"I hope that helps," the boy said, his voice bright with innocence. "You looked really tired."

Orcel offered a faint smile in return. "It does. Thank you."

We've introduced the new elements you wanted, with the dire wolves adding tension to Orcel's escape, followed by his rescue by the group in the carriage. Part Four highlights his desperation and survival instinct, while Part Five shifts the tone slightly, showing Orcel receiving some much-needed help and beginning to recover, albeit slightly.

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The gentle rocking of the carriage lulled Orcel into a restless sleep, but it didn't last long. A sharp jolt sent him jerking awake, his back pressing uncomfortably against the wooden wall of the carriage. He winced, biting back a groan as his wound flared up again.

"Sorry 'bout that!" one of the men managing the horses called from the front. His voice was gruff but friendly, muffled by the cold wind. "Hit a bit of a bump in the road!"

Orcel rubbed his eyes and sat up, glancing around the carriage. The others were still huddled together, many of them fast asleep, though a few stirred and shifted at the noise. A small smile tugged at Orcel's lips as he observed them. It was strange, after everything that had happened, to be surrounded by people who were simply resting—alive.

His mind wandered back to the village, to the destruction he had left behind. The faces of those he couldn't save haunted him, Marnet's most of all. He clenched his fists, forcing himself to push the memories aside. There would be time to mourn later. For now, he needed to focus on surviving.

He shifted his position and tugged at the heavy cloth covering the entrance of the carriage. Slowly, he lifted it just enough to peer outside. The air that greeted him was noticeably warmer than before, and as his gaze drifted beyond the moving wheels, he saw a dirt road stretching ahead of them, lined with trees whose leaves had turned a brilliant orange-brown.

Iit's slready fall, he thought to himself. The change in the weather felt strange—almost disorienting—after so many days of bitter cold.

The carriage trundled along the path, and Orcel's eyes were drawn to the horizon. For a moment, he thought his mind was playing tricks on him, but then his heart skipped a beat. There, looming in the distance, was a massive wall, its stone surface dark against the dim light of the day. Rising above it, almost touching the sky, was a tall tower—or perhaps a castle. It was hard to tell from this distance, but whatever it was, it stood like a sentinel, watching over the land.

Orcel's eyes widened as he took in the sight. He had heard stories of cities fortified by great walls, of castles that housed nobles and kings. But he had never seen one with his own eyes, not like this. The village he had called home was nothing compared to the structure before him.

The realization hit him then, as the carriage moved steadily toward the wall. He was leaving the life he once knew behind. This was a new place, a new world, and he had no idea what awaited him inside those walls. But whatever it was, it would be better than the ashes and snow that had swallowed his past.

As the carriage rolled on, Orcel let the cloth fall back into place, cutting off the view. His heart was still racing, a mix of fear and anticipation swirling inside him. He leaned back, staring at the wooden ceiling above, trying to calm his thoughts.

"Whatever's ahead… it's better than what's behind," he whispered to himself, as if to solidify his resolve.

For now, that was enough.