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Chapter 34 - Rewrite?

I really have the urge to rewrite this story as I honestly find the story to be cheesy and cringe at times very similar to the actually Power Rangers TV series as that is what I was going for when I first started this story. Another thing is there isn't much character interaction or depth in the story plus I don't like that he is the son of Nick Fury and Carol Danvers anymore.

I am going to rewrite the story and have him have the same background maybe in a different city but this time he will be an actually Nightshade and not adopted. I will also make the story more adult oriented, mature and darker. The rewrite will be far better and have more depth and show his life outside of being a Ranger and also off world activities until canon kicks off.

Now should he still have the Master Morpher?

One particular ranger form? This is what I am leaving to

Should I include more rangers in to the story and have him lead the Power Rangers rather than him forming Aegis?

He will also have more powers this time.