Chereads / Forged in Pain / Chapter 18 - The Trial of Flesh (Pt. 2)

Chapter 18 - The Trial of Flesh (Pt. 2)

With every step, the maze seemed to grow darker, the air heavier with the promise of more suffering to come. Jorel, Ryen, and Jain pressed on, their bodies battered and bruised from the relentless physical pain they had already endured. Each of them was acutely aware that they were only halfway through the first section of the maze, and the most harrowing challenges were still ahead.

They soon entered a vast, open chamber that stretched out before them like a gaping maw. The ground was uneven, the floor scattered with deep pits that seemed to go on forever. A foul stench filled the air, a combination of rotting flesh and something far more acrid. Jorel's stomach churned as he realized that the pits were filled with a corrosive liquid, the surface bubbling and hissing with toxic fumes.

The only way forward was to cross the narrow, crumbling bridges that spanned the pits. The bridges were ancient, their stone surfaces cracked and worn, barely wide enough to allow a single person to pass. The edges crumbled away at the slightest touch, and the thought of falling into the corrosive liquid below made Jorel's skin crawl.

"This is insane," Ryen muttered, his voice trembling with fear. "There's no way we'll make it across."

"We don't have a choice," Jain replied, her voice steady despite the terror that gnawed at her insides. "We have to keep moving. Just take it slow, and don't look down."

Jorel took a deep breath, steeling himself for what lay ahead. "I'll go first. If the bridge holds, you two follow right behind me. If it doesn't… well, we'll figure something out."

He stepped onto the first bridge, feeling the stone shift beneath his weight. The surface was slick with moisture, and every step sent small pieces of debris tumbling into the pits below. Jorel's heart pounded in his chest as he inched forward, his arms outstretched for balance. The acrid fumes stung his eyes and burned his lungs with each breath.

Jain and Ryen followed close behind, their movements slow and cautious. Ryen was clearly struggling, his injuries from the earlier traps making it difficult for him to maintain his balance. Jain kept a firm grip on his arm, helping to steady him as they made their way across the treacherous bridge.

Halfway across, the bridge beneath Jorel began to crumble, the stones giving way under his weight. He barely managed to leap to safety, his heart racing as the section of the bridge he had just crossed collapsed into the corrosive liquid below. The impact sent a splash of the liquid up onto the bridge, burning through Jorel's clothes and searing his skin.

The pain was excruciating, a burning agony that shot through his body like wildfire. Jorel gritted his teeth, forcing himself to stay focused. He knew he couldn't afford to lose control now—not when they were so close.

He concentrated on the pain, channeling it into a protective barrier that surrounded the crumbling bridge. The energy from the pain reinforced the remaining stones, holding them together long enough for Jain and Ryen to cross safely.

Jain was the first to reach the other side, her movements swift and sure despite the precariousness of the situation. She turned back to help Ryen, who was struggling to keep his balance on the unstable bridge. The acrid fumes made it difficult to breathe, and Ryen's vision was beginning to blur from the pain and exhaustion.

"Come on, Ryen, you're almost there!" Jain urged, her voice filled with determination.

Ryen gritted his teeth, pushing through the pain as he took one shaky step after another. The bridge continued to crumble beneath him, the stones falling away with each step. Just as he reached the final section of the bridge, the ground gave way completely, sending him tumbling toward the pit below.

Jain lunged forward, grabbing Ryen's arm and pulling him back to safety just in time. They collapsed on the solid ground, gasping for breath, their bodies trembling from the adrenaline and exhaustion. The bridge finally gave way, crashing into the pit below with a sickening splash, the acrid fumes rising up in thick clouds.

Jorel staggered to his feet, his body screaming in protest as he forced himself to keep moving. "We can't stay here," he said, his voice hoarse from the effort. "We need to get out of this chamber before the fumes overwhelm us."

Jain nodded in agreement, helping Ryen to his feet. They moved as quickly as they could, their bodies battered and bruised from the ordeal. The exit was just ahead, a narrow passage that led to the final section of the first zone.

They stumbled out of the chamber and into the passage, the cool air a welcome relief from the oppressive heat and fumes. But the trio knew that their ordeal was far from over. They had survived the first zone of the maze, but the true horrors still lay ahead.

As they caught their breath and tended to their wounds, the ominous sounds of the next zone grew louder, signaling the start of a new phase of the trial. The pain they had endured so far was nothing compared to what awaited them in the trials of the mind.

But for now, they allowed themselves a brief moment of respite, knowing that they would need every ounce of strength to survive what was to come.