Hey7777

It's so interesting I love it, excellent work done in it,you guys should read it rate it love it and if possible marry it it is that good no it's the best,I wouldn't say the best but it's great better 

It is a great story and it could use some improvement but anything other than that it is great,I know it's not easy to write story or novel and the thing that keeps author going is their readers support so I say fighting!

Nice story,keep it up you can do it don't relent, don't quit and don't give Although it might need some glitter. 
Stay strong girl. Can't wait for the next chapter 

Sorry, but I had a lot of trouble getting through this. As quite a lot of punctuation and sentence mistakes, made it difficult for me to get through it. But, please don't mistake this review as any sort of tear down or intending any sort of negativity. I am just giving constructive criticism. So, keep doing your best, and you will eventually strike gold. Hope my review was helpful, Never stop doing the things that you love to do the most.

The Silent Psycho