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Chapter 4 - Hitler Appears! A Boy Dreams Of Becoming A Painter!

Just now.

Fang Yuan has been thinking about a question.

That is, what kind of way to tell the story of Hitler.

...

Write it into a script?

It seems to be a good choice.

After all, in the "Wensiquanyong Creation Competition".

It is recognized as the best way to show your own creation in the form of a script.

Because the narrative structure of the script is different from that of the novel.

It is concise and clear.

Using scenes, actions, expressions, lines and other descriptions can directly allow the audience to obtain the content of the story through visual and auditory perception.

Novels are different.

For the same rain, in the script, you only need to mark the word "rain" and set the weather.

In the novel, a large amount of text is needed to lay the foundation for the environment. What kind of rain is this, and what kind of atmosphere it has.

This is just a small weather, and it is so troublesome.

Not to mention the more delicate psychological description and the more complex internal logic design.

So the script is a very pleasing way.

...

But!

Fang Yuan thought about it.

Still gave up the script method.

It's not that he doesn't know how to write a script.

But he thinks.

If you want to write Hitler's story, the form of a script is not suitable for it.

Although Hitler's life is legendary.

But without artistic processing and re-creation.

It's just turning his experience into a script in a stage-like way.

It would be a legendary account book, but in fact it is very scattered and has no core.

Even though this account book itself is very exciting.

But it's not good enough!

...

Since the script is not good.

What about the novel?

The novelization method is actually not good.

In 10 days.

To write Hitler's life into a novel.

This project is really too big!

...

So after thinking about it.

Fang Yuan decided to open up another track - to show Hitler's life in the form of narration.

Reviewing Hitler's life from a third-person perspective.

Just like telling a story!

Leading the audience into his legendary life!

So.

He wrote the first paragraph.

...

[In the spring of 1908, in a small town in Austria, the local postmaster asked a teenager if he was willing to work in the postal industry. ]

[In the eyes of the postmaster, the child's experience was really sympathetic. ]

[He lost both his parents when he was only 18 years old, and could only live on a little inheritance and a meager pension. ]

[But to the director's surprise, the boy rejected his kindness. ]

["Then how do you make a living?" the postmaster asked. ]

[The boy named Adolf Hitler replied: "My biggest dream in this life is to become an amazing painter."]

...

Fang Yuan only wrote the first paragraph.

There were only a few hundred viewers left in the No. 111 live broadcast room.

Immediately contributed a full screen of barrages!

...

——"What's going on? Foreigners?"

——"No, this guy has studied abroad? Is he going to write a story about a foreigner's struggle?"

——"Interesting, there are quite a few foreigners in this competition, and there are many stories with foreign backgrounds and foreign protagonists, but this is the first time a Dragon has written a foreign story."

——"And look at the time, 1908? More than 100 years ago? He is actually writing about foreign history?"

——"Austria? Is there such a country in the world?"

——"It seems not?"

——"No, I seem to have seen this name in history class, but didn't it merge with the German Empire? I also remember... the lesson about the Iron Chancellor Bismarck?"

——"So, he is not writing a foreign history story, but making a magical change based on real history?"

——"Then Adolf Hitler is also fictional?"

——"The dream is to become an amazing painter? This is a story about a teenager whose parents died, who studied hard and finally became a great painter?"

——"Awesome! A Dragon countryman writes a foreign story, and it is a foreign boy who struggles to become a painter! How did he come up with such an unpopular track?"

——"This brother... has an idea!"

...

The comments are very enthusiastic.

It can be seen that Fang Yuan's first paragraph of the opening attracted a lot of attention.

——Isn't it? A Dragon countryman writes a foreign story, and it is based on Europe in the last century, and the European form at that time has been changed. How can it not be attractive?

...

Just at this time.

Mamtim has led the judges and guests to watch all 128 contestants.

Through the director, we know that Fang Yuan is the only contestant who has started writing.

So.

The main live broadcast room also switched over.

...

"Foreign creation?"

When seeing this paragraph written by Fang Yuan.

Jiang Wen frowned involuntarily.

Let a Dragon countryman write a story about a foreign country...

This is really difficult!

And this story does not happen in modern times.

It is set in Europe in the last world.

This is even more difficult!

...

"It is hard to imagine that the first contestant to start writing in this competition actually chose such a difficult creative direction."

Jiang Wen sighed.

I don't know if he is praising Fang Yuan's courage.

Or is he evaluating his lack of AC in his heart.

...

Miyazaki said: "This direction is too difficult to create. According to what I just learned, this Dragon Country contestant seems to have never been abroad, right?"

Ms. Rowling interrupted: "Even if he has been abroad, it will not help with the creation of this subject matter. You know, he is going to write about Europe in the last century."

"And I, although I am a European, I don't know much about Austria at that time."

...

Hearing Rowling's words.

Leonardo on the side couldn't help but be speechless.

"Ms. Rowling, I have to remind you."

"In 1908, there was no country called Austria in the world."

"It had merged with the German Empire decades earlier and had long become a part of Germany."

Hearing this.

Rowling was a little surprised.

"Ah? There was no country at that time...Oh, I read it wrong, I read it as 1808, sorry."

"But in this way, it further proves the contestant's knowledge reserve in European history..."

...

The second half of the sentence doesn't need to be said.

Rowling's meaning is very simple.

You want to use Europe of the last century as the background of the story.

But you don't even know what countries were there at that time.

Such a low-level mistake...

Such a story is untenable in terms of the background.

...

"I hope this contestant can wake up in time and correct this obvious mistake."

Rowling can only wish him good luck.

It's just...

There is no Austria in 1908 in this world.

Does Fang Yuan really not know?

——————Dividing line——————

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