Did not like how I wrote the fight between metal bat and Sandman so decided it was best to rewrite it
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[Metal bat Vs SandMan]
-Time[1:15am]-
Meeting each other head on In a barrage of blows Metal bat was getting pushed back
"Tch.."
Gritting his teeth in frustration every attack he landed would do nothing as that sand bastard would regenerate back faster than it could do harm
Widening his eyes as he swung down hard pushing every fiber of muscle in that last attack destroying a colossal fist that ripped right under him
"Your tuff kid I'll give you credit but just like what happened with that lizard you ain't gonna win face the facts and go on home don't you have a curfew or something"
As the sand cloud cleared there he was towering over everyone in the factory he was a giant made of sand as he looked down on metal bat
But just as he was about say more the air surrounding metal bat changed watching as he pushed his hand through his hair Thomas instinctively attacked slamming down his giant arm to him
"Oi geezer shut the hell up"
With a single swing to the shock of Thomas as he compressed the sand making up his giant from to the point where he wouldn't doubt it be the same weight as a full sized boat was instantly destroyed my metal bats, metal bat
Crushing the cement under his feet Metal bat propelled himself toward the still shocked Thomas
"YOU MAY BE ABLE TO REGENERATE YOURSELF BUT I COULD HONESTLY NOT GIVE A DAMN!"
[SAVAGE TORNADO!]
With a angry surge of attacks to the point where the wind pressure created by metal bat made it look like a tornado
This kid! Is pushing me back!?
It was then Thomas learned something a small detail he overlooked the more he attacked the brat the more he grew widening his eyes as chunks of his body where being torn to shred he gritted his teeth he had to do something contrary to how powerful his abilities where it still had its flaws abit not noticeably but he uses a lot of energy reforming ever single time it was tiring having to put yourself back together
Opening his mouth he released a tsunami of sand temporary holding back metal bat
Quickly he bolstered his right arm as the sand making up his giant body was surged towards it creating an unbelievable scene
[GIANT FIST!]
"Tyler you have to stop this he's going to kill him!"
Grabbing onto Tyler arms as he leaned against the wall smoking his next cig he glanced towards the worry stricken Sage
"Don't give up on him so easily"
Looking at him as if he was crazy she was shocked and yet she had a feeling inside her stomach that she should listen to him
Hearing a loud explosion occur she couldn't look away as Sandman attack crushed metal bat
Panting Thomas began to smile the kid was done but how wrong he was as his eyes widened widely an explosion broke as the sand from his fist launched everywhere as a blood soaked metal bat appeared mid air
"You gave me a good beating back there! Now I'm PUMPED!!"
Grinning widely Thomas was to late to react no to slow to react
[THOUSAND HOMERUNS!]
What is all this? It was as if times slowdown for Thomas as he watched as metal bat pulverized him into dust
Is this what losing feel like huh this sucks…
With one last good swing Thomas was nothing more than a small pile of sand
Panting frantically metal bat swung his bat over his shoulder as he spat on the ground
"Tch…Now zenko going to think I went to the beach"
[Metal Bat Victory!]
-Time[9minutes]-
Instead of hearing a roaring crowd like before he glanced to his right as he was met with the shocked looks of everyone all except Tyler
Until walking towards him as the man who started all of this began to clap
" you did good kid"
Patting metal bat on the shoulder he didn't know what to say so he nodded
Rasing his hand Tyler beckoned for a still shocked Sage as she realized she was still holding the black suit case she rushed to them
Handing the case to Tyler he passed it to Metal bat
"Without pain without sacrifice we would have nothing and tonight you all have witnessed what it means to have both so now I ask each and everyone of you one simple question If you died right now how would you feel about your life?"
Looking towards the crowd Tyler began to walk to them as he pointed at one man in particular a overweight man as sweat trikled down his face
"What your name bub"
Gulping nervously Tyler waited patiently until he spoke
"Fred"
Nodding he looked him dead in the eye
"How would you feel Fred I won't make fun of you tell me"
"….Disappointed my mom said I was born to do great things but look at me what sort of great things can a man like me do other than eat my depression away I was born with powers but so what I work as a janitor a janitor "
Wiping the tears away from his eyes Tyler spoke
"Congratulations your one step closer to hitting rock bottom but don't you worry Fred there only one way left to go and it's up"
Patting his shoulders as Fred looked at him in confusion as realization slowly seeped in
"We are raised in a generation where profits can say who eats and who doesn't who lives and who doesn't we have all been the victims of favoritism weather you know it or not we are advertised as children told to dress this way smile for the camera and have our faces plastered in magazines"
Walking around the attention was all on Tyler
"Told we are special and in the future we would become the heros of the next generation but once they realized your not as popular as him as flashy her as cool as the rest your thrown to the side"
He could already see how his words affected most of them
"You are not special you are not beautiful or unique snowflake your the same decaying imperfect organic matter as everyone else
And you should be proud I say never be complete stop being perfect I say let evolve let the chips fall where they may this is your life and it ending one minute at a time"