[hello everybody this is my first fan fic (also my first novel ever) so I need your ideas and suggestions either in the grammar or the plot]
'for thoughts'
"for talk"
[for me saying anything]
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In the Konoha orphanage, a boy named Kitsune looked in the mirror with shock in his eyes "What's happened? Why am I in this body the last thing I can remember was playing video games in my room"
kitsune thought "I need to know where is this place. I will go out to see the place around here" Then Kitsuna left the room and went to explore the building 'I think this is an orphanage. But why did it seem like an old orphanage' While he was exploring the orphanage he heard someone calling for him he looked at the person he just knew that was his name for some reason
he looked at the sound source and saw an old nanny "what are doing here kitsune" he was thinking why is she familiar. then he said "I just want to go to play with the other kids"
she looked at him with some suspicious "But the play yard is on the opposite side of the building"
he has an embarrassed smile on his face "Hehe yes know I will go there right now" he leaves the nanny. She thought 'Kids these days have no shame. also, when was this kid so excited about playing with other kids'
When Kitsune reached the play yard he was shocked 'This is Impossible. I am in Konoha!!' he was staring at the Hokage rock. 'now everything makes sense I have been reincarnated in Naruto world'
he thought 'This is so exciting I can use chakra and make cool Techniques. But... this world is so dangerous it will be a waste if I die early. I can't do anything stupid. So I need to think carefully. First of all, it seems like I don't have a rare bloodline or anything that can boost my power quickly because of this I will double my efforts. Also, it will be hard for me to get the best jutsu techniques so I need to work on that too. Anyway, what will be my focus? Maybe medical jutsu or fuinjutsu I love these two and I think it is the best way for a civilian ninja. fuck it I will take both of them. I will be the strongest and no one will be a match for me HAHAHAH!!'
"kitsune why are you laughing like this" A boy named Akiko was confused because of Kitsune's weird laughing. Kitsune looked at him and thought 'I need to know some information. Think his name is Akiko. I don't know why I can remember their names but that is good for me. It will be a little bit of a headache. I need to know what time I am in'
"sorry Akiko. Don't worry I was just thinking about something funny. Anyway did you hear about what happened" Akiko thought 'I don't remember anything happening this month unless he means the fourth Hokage dies. but isn't it too late to ask about it?' Akiko said, "do mean the fourth Hokage death?" kitsune was shocked and Akiko could see this in his face. for sure kitsune knows this but he pretends like he doesn't "When did he die?" Akiko replied with a sad face to kitsune "he died a week ago. Protecting us from the kyubi. It's a little weird that you don't know yet. I have told you "
then for the rest of the day, kitsune was thinking and planning for his future while exploring the village. Kitsune thought 'So what I know so far is my name is Kitsune it's a little weird but that's ok. My parents died in a secret mission Also, I am 4 years old I don't remember any important character at my age. Naruto is 1 week old so I have 12-13 years until the plot starts and 15-17 until the fourth great ninja war. It's enough time for me to get so strong. of course unless my talent was so trash. But even if it was that bad I could figure out something to help.'
[later in that day]
kitsune was lying on his bed thinking about Chakra and powers that he wanted to get 'I hope my chakra Affinity is fire and wind. I can make a lot of strategies and combos with these two. Water is also a good choice it's the most flexible attribute. I can attack and defend with a water affinity I can't say the same for fire. With wind and lighting, they are very good at attacking but weak at defense. Earth is the most defensive attribute but has weak attacks.'
'aghh... I really envy those who have kekkei genkai they have the benefit of the two attributes. I can't say this for all of the kekkei genkai but a good amount of them. I will try my luck to make one but let's just leave that for the future. Wait I think I have a very good idea it's working I will boost my power to a good level. But I need to be at Jonin level to make it work. This will be one of my long-term projects.
Kitsune slept while he was thinking about all the different possibilities and the powers that he could get. in the long term and the short term.
[This chapter is 900 words I am not used to writing so don't expect me to give you 1.5k words until I am used to it and feel comfortable with it]
[this was tough I struggled for a week to make this but I did it your comment will help me a lot]