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Chapter 4 - The Formation

Chapter 4 

The Formation 

"Ahh what do we have here, bloody note on an old corpse lets see what is says" 

"My name is Oliver Smith. I am writing this as a warning for whoever comes 

here. If you find this note, run. This is hell. God finally had enough of our 

sins and has started the rapture. Everything was fine just some time ago. 

I was here with my son. Oh, my poor Gregory. His own mother killed him. 

Ripped him into pieces. I don't know what happened. She just screamed, 

said some bullshit I cannot remember and became this monster. Eyes oh 

the eyes. On every part and the branches and the chanting. It wont stop. 

My head is bursting with pain. I cannot deal with this. I saw her again, 

she looks beautiful I am drawn towards her but I know what will happen 

if I go near. Another monster is also in here somewhere. I need to get 

out of this place. I see a window. Maybe if I can just get to it, I can 

escape. I need to escape." 

"I did it. I'm out. I don't know why I am still writing on this note but if I die off my 

experiences need to be documented. Okay. My name is Oliver smith. I am 

writing this on the morning of 25th of October 2005 in its early hours. I 

am 35 years old and I till now was a family man with a wife and a child. 

From the previous page I think you already know what happened but I 

need to keep calm. Control my emotions. This…. This situation now that I 

realize is Freedom. True freedom. Ha ha. No…. I think I am going mad. 

What is happening. I heard other howls too… did people turn into those 

things? How…. Why… Why am I left. If I am here there must be others who 

are still normal. Maybe my wife can still be okay. Maybe this is all just a 

prank. A sick fucking prank. No…. I see another in the distance. What is 

happening. Holy fuck that one just fucking killed someone. There must be 

a way to get out of this situation. I just need to find it." 

"I think I'm safe. I hopped in my car and drove off. I don't know what the fuck is 

happening. This is nothing like the rapture I had heard about in churches. 

Does God hate us this much? Is this our god? The one we venerated our 

entire lives just threw us away so easily? No. I don't believe it. This isn't 

the god I worshiped and these aren't his angels. I will kill every last one 

of them. I swear to the real god if he is still out there. I will take revenge 

of what happened to my family. But for now, I need to survive this. I am 

in the outskirts of the town. Surrounded by forest, I don't see anyone or 

any of the demons. I think I'll stay here for a bit. I don't have any food 

except this pack of sprouts. I don't know what to do. I am just filled with 

rage. Oh lord I ask for thy mercy as I have allowed my vessel to be filled 

with a deadly sin. I think I should lay down for a bit. Maybe calm down a 

little." 

"October 26th, I guess" 

"Added the date. I don't know how I slept this much. Woke up the next day or if 

it is in the case my brain isn't going smoosh. I feel really hungry though. I 

miss everyone. I miss my family. My son died in front of me by the hands 

of my own wife. What the fuck is happening. Is this even real. This all just 

feels like a dream. A bad, bad dream. What if it was one? Should I drive 

and go see if it was. This road seems familiar I think I travelled it before. 

Maybe I slept and dreamt the whole thing. My wife could be at the home 

worried sick. Why am I even writing on here. Wait. No. I'm writing. This is 

the same piece of paper. My head hurts. I don't think I am or was 

dreaming. Oh god. This is real. What the fuck. What happened. Are the 

people who turn still in there or did they already ascend only to leave us 

down here to suffer. The more I think about this it seems like a rapture 

to me. I think I should see what the factory is like. Seems like a shit idea 

but it might be safe since no one would have been there at the time of 

the shitstorm." 

"Ah fuck. I was wrong so wrong. I forgot about the night watch. Ah. Alan was in 

the hiding on the road too because of a broken car. Damn it. The night 

security had turned into one of them. Alan, I don't know how or what 

walked up to it in some mindfuck state and then he wailed. I knew what 

was coming. He turned too. He turned before my eyes. I saw it. His last 

moment of consciousness. All fucked up panicking and confused. I think I 

am turning too. My hands aren't feeling my own. I can't even stop writing. 

I need to stop. Stop. Stop." 

"I don't care anymore. Even if it a rapture, I don't want to turn into one of those 

and kill someone. No matter if I would be inside or not, I can't let it 

happen. Taking your own life is supposed to be the greatest sin. Doesn't 

matter. Even if I go to hell now, at least I won't turn into one of those 

things." 

"I…. I stabbed myself. My guts are spilling out as I write. This is my last note. 

Hope someone finds this and puts my experiences to good use, I think I'll 

just rest on this tree until I die off. I'm off to hell. Adios people. I will miss 

what we once had." 

"Eh a child of God eh. No matter. Mate, I don't think you were turning into one of 

them. Still, you thought for the better Oliver. You certainly are up in 

heaven as you would call it. I think you would regret your note falling in 

the hands of a non-believer but just for you I'll say this AMEN MY 

BROTHER, AMEN." 

It was the fateful day. The day when Mark and his party of people were going to 

head off to the armory at that fateful night. All of them were nervous as 

a last minute debrief was going on. There were 6 of them in the room 

including Eric. Mark was going over the plan one last time. 

"Alright so we will take the route as planned. We will go from the back door as 

the watch party has seen a couple of angels out front. We will stick to the walls 

until someone spots one of them around the side. If that happens, we stray off 

straight into the darkness of the woods. Judging by the absence of ears and the 

overabundance of eyes on their body we can assume that their main sense is 

that of sight." "But what if they have other senses or something. What if we get 

tracked in the woods?" Asked Emma. She was one of the 2 women in the 

expedition. The other named Madison. There were 4 men including Eric and 

Mark the other 2 being Joshua, a friend of Madison and Dylan. Over the past 2 

days there had been many meetings and debriefings. They started with 13 

people in the first meeting but as the plan went on being formulated further 

people resigned out of the fear of demise. By the end only the 6 were left. They 

were hurdled around a table looking at the route they had created. The map lay 

in front of them with a pencil line drawn on it. It started at the back of Arvada 

and went on to the armory. They also had a list of what they were to take to the 

expedition and what were they to bring back based on calculated guesses. List 

included things like guns, silencers to suppress the noise, gloves and vests for 

the upcoming winter days and any other useful thing they were to find. 

"Hey if we are going to do this what should we call ourselves?" asked Dylan. 

"What do you mean?" asked mark. "You know, we are a group of survivors who 

will embark on a deadly mission. We should give our group a name. Like the 

hermits or the lone wolves" "What about Stalker?" asked Emma "I have read it 

in a lot of places. It is mainly used by Russians in their books." Eric was a bit 

excited at the aspect as he has part Russian spending much of his time with his 

grandfather who had hailed from Russia during the war. "Yeah, that sounds 

good." said Dylan. "The name doesn't matter if people die. We need to focus on 

the expedition more than some taken name to feel like a badass." The room felt 

silent. "Look I don't have a problem with names. We can call ourselves the 

stalkers but we need to focus more on the task at hand." The 5 nodded. Mark 

looked at a makeshift sundial from the window. "There are roughly 2 hours left 

for sunset. Go pack your stuff for the expedition. Meet up at the back gate." 

Eric and the others left the room. "Hey you are Eric, right? Heard about you 

from mama luna. I am so sorry man. I can understand how it is like to lose 

someone close". As he turned his head he saw Madison, the other woman in the 

group. She was in her mid-30s. Way older than Eric and more experienced with 

guns and survival than anyone else. She and her husband had been in the 

armed forces and he had died on a battlefield some time ago. "Yeah. My guy 

died and the squad leader gave me time off to mourn but then this happened 

when I came back. I guess life just can't stop giving me shit after shit." Eric 

was both startled and uncomfortable talking about his daughter. "Yeah, shit 

happened to us all, I guess. Doesn't matter. Let's not talk about that for now." 

"Oh yeah, I get you don't worry. Just making sure you up for the job at hand. You 

know, we can't be the sulking ones right." Eric looked at her with a weird mix of 

anger, frustration and sadness. She had managed to hit him where it hurt. "So, 

if I even mourn Ellie now, I get called The Sulking One. Who is she to ask me if 

I'm fit for the job." Eric thought. "The woman with no compassion towards her 

own dead husband is telling me this." He continued to think. Madison had 

already left the place before he could say anything. Feeling a bit defeated he 

walked to his room thinking about if what he was about to do was a stupid idea 

or not. At one side he was proving his worth by surviving in this waste and on 

the other he thought he was just throwing his life away. "This is important for 

everyone's survival. Someone has to do this. Winter is soon approaching and 

we need the clothes and whatever else is in there." As eric entered the room a 

musty stench washed over him. The room had grown mold in the past few days 

and had reeked like desolate old concrete. He rested his head on his makeshift 

pillow which was just a sheet filled with leaves. And laid down. "Two hours. 

Just two more hours. I may never come back from the expedition." He thought. 

Eric sprang up and emptied his backpack. Then from the contents on the floor 

he picked up his rusty water bottle and gloves and attached them to the bag. 

He also picked up a flashlight and hanged it onto one of the zippers of the bag 

with a string. He left the rest of his bag empty to fill it up later with stuff at the 

armory. He looked around to find more helpful items to take with him when 

suddenly his gaze struck the yellow coat. He sighed and took his knife from his 

belt and fashioned a bracelet from the it. He wore it on his wrist as he thought 

that even if he dies tonight a part of his daughter will always be with him. 

Fastening the knife to his belt he sprung up with the bag and wore it on his 

back. He left the room thinking he might never see it again. "It is nearing 

sunset. I should hurry up." He thought and locked the room behind him. He put 

the key in a potted plant pot near the door as he didn't see sense in taking it 

with him if he didn't return. "It would ruin a good lock." He thought. 

He went downstairs to Ellie's grave. He held the stone and kissed it goodbye as 

he went towards the back side gate. He found Mark already ready for the 

expedition and 4 others not including Emma on the sight. He went to the door 

as no one said a word. People had gathered there to wish them luck. Mama 

Luna was there. She came up to eric and placed her wrinkled hand on his 

shoulder. "Go out there and show the world what you can do, and take care 

sweetie. This old woman will be waiting to feed you all once you get back." 

Everyone's mood brightened up a bit as Emma came up running from the back. 

"I'm sorry I got late. Didn't know what to pack up." "Don't worry. We will head 

out in a minute we were just waiting for you." The group faced the door as Mark 

opened it with a semi loud thud. Eric's heart sank a little at the sound as 

everyone prepared themselves for what was about to come.

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