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Breaking my fate..

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Chapter 1 - Character sheet

[Mc information and character images]

Name - Tang so goon [image here]

Race - Human (mortal)

Age - 200

Height - 5'5

Title -  Martial God of the great scheme heavenly pavilion.

Position - 'Divine supreme of the forbidden tower sect'

                   - 'Creator of the great scheme'

                   - 'Mortal god'

                   - 'Unworldly mortal'

Family - Tang family - mother side - the Gu family -father side

- Gu Lintian (Older brother)

- Mother Gu (sister in law)

- Gu changee (nephew)

- Gu Qingyi (unknown )

- Gu Xian'er (niece/lover)

Cultivation Level - Peak Immortal king realm- True Tribulation realm- (true but not true he doesn't use spiritual or magic techniques)

Martial arts - Aura - and Qi control Level - Bright realm (peak mortal martial arts level, mortal god)

Martial art technique -  Phantom illusion sword arts - (Great perfection realm)

Physique - Selfless and Formless Sword body - (Great perfection realm)

Movement techniques - 1 step to heaven, 2 step reach 1,000 miles, 3 step illusion of earth.

Mount - Great tyrant horned eagle - Mc doesn't fly so he has a mount he chills on sometime. [image here]

[Single system mission - make sure the villain live's till the end - reward - freedom]

[Other Characters]

Gu changee - [Villain that must live]

Seol su yeon [Past life lover]

Moyong Hyun [Past life lover] 

Yue Mingkong [Past life lover]

Su Qingee [Past half lover as she has two souls] 

Aunt Xue [Past life lover]

Yan Ji [Past life lover]

Yin Mei [Past life lover] 

[Others will be added as the story comes along]

This will be a break down of cultivation of spiritual and magic arts - go up against Inner Qi and aura arts, it's not the best, but I'm trying.

Third rank warriors 

Second rank warrior 

First rank warrior 

This make up the first 3 levels of martial arts, aura and Qi control - they go into, low, middle, master, and peak. Each of these represent, the first mortal realms in fated villain, up until great tribulation. 

Peak realm - this represents after the mortal realms, until the god realm, because this has 5 stages in the martial peak realm.

Transcendent Realm - This represents the first few realms of the god realm, as a person steps on to the path where no mortal should have this kind of power.

Absolute realm - This is the later stage of the god realms, as this is usually the limit for a mortal body with god like strength, this is the realm most are stuck in at its peak unable to break through.

Bright realm - This is the realm were your body starts to fracture, as you have almost stepped into the realm of immortals, with a mortal body, this is peak false immortal realm, with power that can threaten true immortal realm. 

True tribulation realm (Immortal king) - it is unknown how to reach this realm, because no mortal through martial arts has stepped into this realm. (Besides Mc)

I hope the clears up some of the confusion, as I know muirm is usually a lot weaker then Chinese cultivators. Still I like Muirm better so while the Mc won't be one shooting everyone he is still powerful before he steps into the True tribulation realm. Yes the Mc is mortal as all martial arts are, they life spans increase but not as drastically as cultivators, as the Mc is now he just want to live like a mortal, eat laugh, watch the world around him, and finish his mission, his life span is 100,000 years at this point, because of a mark in his cultivation.

You'll just have to see how he changes and wants to live for other things.

Mc face and chest are not fragmented like a few places on his arms and side of his middle section is, he will delay it with medical pills, but if you don't like his look, I'm sorry, most people only see moon light or a shimmer over his arms, his eyes and face are feminine in nature do to his high realm and low aging. His women know he is a man love him, no yuri, no yaoi, what is his is his. 

His women will love him anyway, they have loved him over life times, and want nothing more but to help and love the man that loved them more then any mission or fate given to himself.

Mc has been trapped in this game for 99 life times, he didn't cry, he didn't get cucked or go super edgy, all he wanted was to go home, but when the worlds he has been to and the past he can barely remember, come crashing down on him, he becomes more and more convinced this is where he should stay. The Mc will do anything for his women even when he was controlled by the will of heaven or the outer god. This is a love story in the first 15 chapters, then we can move into the action parts, btw Gu changee and others pov will be heavy, so it will not all be from Mc pov. 

Mc is not all there but is not broken, as his memories are behind the golden wall of ever lasting fate, so he can't really remember but has a feeling about it. The Mc women are Yandere their goal is to make sure Mc doesn't die again, as they had to watch like a back seater over 99 lifetimes as he loved them so much, moyung hyun has the first 5 chapters as she is the first wife and the one who saw his struggle the most, she is the first woman who loved him, not just for his power, looks, or anything else, but because he showed her over his many lives, that he would even push back fate and die for her as long as she was safe. 

Moyung hyun "why do you.. why do you struggle.. and hurt so much for me?" 

She looked down at the sword he let sink into his heart, her body trembling, why? Why had she done this, why did she have to, why was it her heart, her everything that needed to die.

Mc "shh, it is fine, I could not watch you die anymore, or take your life with my own hands.." 

The man's face in front of her was calm, so calm that it scared her, her bones felt frozen, as her heart beat felt as if it would explode.. as her mind raced she felt a warm hand caress her cheek.

Mc "do not break, this was fate.. something I would have followed.. so very long ago.. but I can not watch you fall apart.." 

The man said his eyes so soft and warm, as if the world around him didn't matter, as for the first time in a very long time he smiled, her hand reaching out to touch his face gently, her eyes shaking as it turned to ash.

Moyung hyun "you can't even save yourself! Let me go! Please! My love!!" 

Her body trying to move towards the high cliff, yelling as she tried to push him away, wanting to die, wanting nothing more but to save him.

Mc "please.. I don't want to watch you die.. not again,,"

Her eyes looked back as they shook, his form was no longer strong like a wall that nothing could break, her mind replaying the words he said as he pullled her close, "again?" 

His eyes looking into hers as she shakes, knowing she would never understand, "I have watched you die, countless times.. because of my fate.." his voice dragging away as he pulled her arm again, pushing her sword more into his heart.

"Your.." Hyun said as she looked from her hand to his face, watching the moon behind her love, as crystals fell from his eyes. Her eyes wide as she tried to reach out, but scared as he turned to ash slowly.

"I love you.. momo.. in this life.. and the next and the next.."