Certainly! Here's the re-edited version with your requested corrections, and I'll ensure the pace is slow and steady for suspense, following the original point you stopped at.
Mira stirred awake as the soft rays of sunlight filtered through the curtains, casting a warm glow across the room. She shifted slightly, the comforting pressure of a strong arm still wrapped securely around her. Zamian was there beside her, his warmth radiating against her skin. His presence, solid and unwavering, always made her feel safe.
"Good morning, love," his deep, velvety voice rumbled softly, breaking the morning silence like a gentle caress.
