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Chapter 17 - Palpable tension

Mia sat at her desk, the weight of the morning's encounters pressing heavily on her mind. She took a deep breath and opened her laptop, pulling up the document she and Andrew had been working on. The title, "The Women of Callum: Stories of Resilience," stared back at her. She had been invested in this piece from the start, eager to give a voice to these remarkable women.

She began prepping her notes, organizing the interviews and their emotional testimonies, trying to find the right angle to bring their stories to life. Her mind kept drifting back to Andrew, to his intense gaze, his persistent presence. Mia felt an irritating thought creep in—despite everything, he had a way of being annoyingly charming.

The clock struck eleven. She grabbed her notebook and headed to the conference room, her heart pounding in her chest. She found Andrew already there, flipping through his own notes. He looked up and smiled when she entered.

"Right on time," he said, his tone light.

"Let's just get this over with," Mia replied, sitting down across from him. "We need to finalize the angle for our article."

Andrew nodded, leading Mia to get straight to business. 

"I think we should focus on how these women have rebuilt their lives despite the trauma they experienced." Mia said.

Andrew frowned. "I don't disagree, but we also need to highlight the ongoing struggles they face. It's not just about resilience; it's about acknowledging that the pain never fully goes away."

Mia crossed her arms. "If we dwell too much on the pain, it becomes a sob story. We need to show their strength, their ability to overcome."

"That's not what I'm saying," Andrew countered, his tone growing more heated. "We can't gloss over their suffering. It's a critical part of their story."

"And I'm not suggesting we gloss over it," Mia shot back. "But if we focus too much on the negative, we risk overshadowing their achievements."

"I know that, Mia. But I also know that these women wanted their stories told truthfully." Andrew replied, his jaw clenching, despite being incredibly upset at the moment, she couldn't help but glance at how it made his already chiseled jaw look even more masculine. 

Andrew sighed, running a hand roughly through his hair breaking her out of her short trance, "They wanted their pain acknowledged, not swept under the rug."

They went back and forth, their voices rising with each passing minute. Neither was willing to back down, and the atmosphere grew increasingly tense.

"Must you be so stubborn that you have to fight me on every step?!" Andrew finally exploded, his frustration evident.

Mia's eyes flashed with anger. "Oh, because it's your article, only your opinion matters then?!"

Andrew took a deep breath, trying to regain his composure. "That's not what I meant, and you know it. But we need to find a way to balance these perspectives. Otherwise, we're doing a disservice to these women either way."

Mia gritted her teeth. "Fine. But we need to be careful not to turn this into a pity piece. They deserve better than that."

Andrew nodded, albeit reluctantly. "Agreed. Let's try to find that balance."

The next half hour was spent in strained silence, both of them meticulously editing the article, weaving together stories of pain and resilience. The tension in the room was palpable, each of them pushing and challenging the other, unable to find common ground.

As they moved on to another point, the argument flared up again. "I think we should include more direct quotes from the women," Mia suggested. "Their words are powerful and need to be heard."

Andrew shook his head. "Too many quotes will clutter the piece. We need to paraphrase and summarize where possible."

"Paraphrasing dilutes their voices," Mia argued. "We need to let them speak for themselves."

"But too many direct quotes will disrupt the flow of the article," Andrew insisted. "It'll be harder for readers to follow."

The argument continued, neither willing to compromise. Finally, Andrew threw up his hands in exasperation. "You know what? Do whatever you want. Clearly, you don't care about my input."

Mia felt a surge of anger. "Oh, because it's your article, only your opinion matters then?!"

Andrew glared at her. "That's not what I meant, and you know it. But we need to find a way to balance these perspectives. Otherwise, we're doing a disservice to these women."

Mia gritted her teeth. "Fine. But we need to be careful not to turn this into a pity piece. They deserve better than that."

Andrew nodded, albeit reluctantly. "Agreed. Let's try to find that balance."

The rest of the meeting was spent in relative silence, both of them editing and tweaking the article, trying to find a middle ground. By the time they finished, it was clear they hadn't resolved their differences, but they had at least managed to produce a rough draft.

As they left the conference room, Mia couldn't help but feel a mix of frustration and grudging respect for Andrew. Despite their disagreements, he pushed her to think critically and challenge her assumptions.

Back at her desk, Mia saw a message from Mikee on her phone. "Wtf? Why? You caved, didn't you?!"

Mia sighed, typing a quick reply. "He's joining us for dinner. Long story."

The rest of the day passed in a blur of meetings and tasks, with Mia and Andrew avoiding each other as much as possible. Every time they crossed paths, the tension was palpable, a reminder of their earlier argument.

Finally, it was time to head out and meet Mikee for dinner. Mia packed up her things and made her way to the lobby, where Andrew was waiting. They walked in silence, the events of the day still hanging heavily between them.

As they neared the bistro, Mia spotted Mikee waiting outside. Her friend's eyes lit up when she saw them, but there was a mischievous glint in her gaze.

"Hey, you two! How was your day?" Mikee asked as they approached.

"Eventful," Mia replied dryly, shooting a glance at Andrew.

"Productive," Andrew added, his tone equally dry.

Mikee looked between them, sensing the tension. "Well, this should be interesting. Let's see if you two can survive dinner without killing each other."

Mia forced a smile, silently praying for strength. It was going to be a long night.

As they sat down and began to order, Mia couldn't help but wonder how the rest of the evening would unfold. Despite their differences, she couldn't deny that working with Andrew had been...interesting. And she had a feeling this was just the beginning of their complicated partnership.