LordSilvere

Writing Quality: Room for improvement. Most chapters have light to medium editing errors and the spacing (Or lack there of...) between character perspectives can sometimes throw you off.
Story Development: It's clear that the author has a clear picture of where the story is going. That said... it doesn't always make sense. I've also noticed some loopholes.
Character Design: This one frustrated me. I'm just over 100 chapters in and I lost count of the times the MC alone made me go, "No. C'mon, Harry wouldn't do that!". And the MC isn't the only one. My point... these are pre-established characters. If significant change to said character's personality does happen, it needs to both make sense from a story perspective AND feel natural to the person reading the story. It did neither for me.
Update Stability: I just started reading the story yesterday, so I couldn't say.
World Background: Solid. Not rock solid, but close.

All in all, I enjoyed my read. 👍

Really nice, just started reading and looks promising, i hope it continues in the right direction. 

Also random meme

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Where did the chapters go?...............

it has been a really good read from start to finish.  would recommend.

an amazing book a mist read for a fanfiction it is really entertaining and im glad I decided to read it. author keep up the good work and thank you for the lovly read hope you keep writing it

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the beginning reminds me of the count of monte cristo..................................................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,


Not bad but Author-sama should really try to capture more of the characters emotions, every time I read the story it's like watching a real good movie where all the actors are trashs.

really hope to see more of this[img=recommend]

where are the chapters man i didnt finish it im sad

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