First, I want to rant. Let me have it, it's for my sanity: So, MTL70 was titled "The World-Shattering Birthday Party, even Captain America is confused!" and here is an excerpt from that chapter:
Although immersed in the joy of celebrating his birthday, Pietro clearly felt that something was wrong with his sister, sister Wanda.
The way she looked at Su Che, her eyes were undisguised!
It's like looking at a lover.
It's over.
As the person who is most familiar with Wanda, Pietro is very sure.
Wanda absolutely loves this young man named Su Che in front of her.
That kind of look can never be misunderstood!
After liking Natasha Romanoff, my younger sister will start liking Su Che who was only seen once in the coffee shop before!
- End Excerpt -
There wasn't any build up to the birthday party, it just happens. In my series however, I've been hinting at the birthday party, and then in the previous chapter it was talked about in detail. This chapter is meant to expand on that. Steve was also invited, for whatever reason. I mean Steve is a complete stranger and has had ZERO interactions with Wanda and Pietro. I also CANNOT REMEMBER when the fuck did the MC even meet officially with Wanda and Pietro to be invited to their birthday party .-. But I AM GUESSING that it was Natasha's idea to invite the MC and Steve to the party, since she's the only one who's had contact with the Maximoff siblings so far…
After this chapter, it goes straight into the situation with Thor, and then it goes on to suddenly STANE IS FUCKING OUT AND BATTLING WITH TONY STARK? HOW IN THE? HE WAS ARRESTED WASN'T HE? HOW'S HE FIGHTING TONY THEN?
I've also read through the entire Thor thing and the fight between MTL70 to MTL76. And I am going to change it like I did the debut arc. Here's where the change will be, I am going to push the Thor scene until AFTER the fight of Tony and Stane.
Additionally, here's how the MTL sequence is like for the upcoming chapters:
1) Birthday Celebration.
2) Thor gets banished, and Loki takes over cuz Odin is in Odin Sleep.
3) Tony and Stane fights.
4) For some reason, Loki KNOWS about Hela and Surtr in MTL78 (WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK?). So after the fight, it goes straight into Thor's plot, but with many changes and random things happening in between. (Like in MTL86, while Thor is still banished, this is an actual sentence in the MTL: Sitting on Thor's lap, Medusa Doris held Thor's cheek, her tone was like coaxing a child: "Money is very important on our earth.) Who the fuck is Medusa Doris (apparently an Agent of Shield who seduced Thor in the MTL) O_O
5) I stopped reading after MTL 78, but apparently just 50 chapters later, the battle of New York happens. In MTL 137 it's titled "Loki and Nebula won't fall in love" WHY THE FUCK IS NEBULA THERE?
Anyways, the whole plotline is so jumbled and messed up in between that I WANT, NEIGH, I NEED to fix it up. The problem is, this fix up will take MUCH LONGER than my first Original Arc. Also, i know i did a vote a week ago, but this vote is different from that one. I have already consolidated and taken your votes into account. These new votes are for Volume 2 specifically. Once again, comment on the paragraph of the vote to place your vote and also give any feedback or suggestions you may have!
So here's the vote:
1) Fix the sequence of the entirety of the MTL chapters, MTL70 to MTL160. That's 90 MTL chapters that I will have to read up on and then subsequently create a cohesive storyboard/storyline for the series, before subsequently writing original chapters. This may take me anywhere from a week to a month, and my Uni is starting back up in 2 weeks as well. By the end of this fix, I hope to end Volume 2 with the Battle of New York HOPEFULLY by end of September, because there's a lot of grounds to cover in between. (this does not mean that you wont get any chapters until September, it just means that I hope to finish the volume by September. Once I get the storyboard up and running, hopefully it wouldn't take me long, I can start writing the original chapters and continue updating this series)
2) Don't fix the sequence, just fix the chapter contents. In this case, the story will be MEGA confusing for all of you, and I'm not kidding. It really fucking is. If you see my earlier points, there's so many goddamn out-of-pocket plotlines happening, and the ones I pointed out is just like 0.001% of the shithousery. If anyone votes for this option, you will be saving me a lot of time, BUT at the expense of YOUR reading experience. I much prefer option 1.
If you guys want to know whether it will be worth waiting for me to fix the storyline of the MTL up till the end of MTL160, you can read from MTL67 to MTL77 to decide. The shithousery is along those lines. (I don't know about post MTL77, but just from the title alone…). You can read the MTL here: https://mtlarchive.com/novel/people-keep-diaries-at-marvel-and-the-avengers-are-dumbfounded
Or just go to mtlarchive.com and search for "People keep diaries at marvel and the avengers are dumbfounded."