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immortals of evermore

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In "Immortals of Evermore," a protagonist finds themselves in a state of numb existence, counting endlessly until a mysterious force pulls them towards a bright white light. As they approach a giant white wall and a golden circle, their conscience begins to fade, leading to a surprising and life-changing experience beyond.
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Chapter 1 - chapter 0 Prolog

A/N: Hello this is my first time trying to write a novel so sorry if it's not great I will try to get better at writing as time goes on. There will be some info dumps in the first few chapters so please bear with me. Thank you for taking a look at my novel I'm excited about the future of this novel as I try to take my thoughts and put them to paper. Once again I thank you I hope you enjoy Immortals of Evermore.

'I feel nothing... like I'm in a sensory deprivation tank just existing with no destination. I don't know how long I've been like this quite frankly I'm surprised I haven't gone crazy yet. If this is the afterlife it's kinda meh to be honest no emotions just floating around metaphorically speaking I guess I'll just keep existing not like I have a choice o well it is what it is. Wait!! I know what to do I'll start counting forever starting from 1 ok let's do this.'1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9........'76,435,678,975. 76,435,678,9- wh-what is this feeling? Feels like I'm being pulled somewhere why now am I moving? Who/what wants me there now'.

As I feel a greater pull on what I assume is my soul. As my soul starts to move faster and faster I start to see lights moving like someone flipped the hyperdrive switch on. I'm starting to see a bright white light off in the very very far distant.

'Hmm it looks to be getting closer '

As I get a little bit closer it appears to be a giant white wall that starts to grow in all Directions.

'I-It's getting closer to me or is it the other way around? That's not important what is important however is what will happen to me when I hit that giant white wal- what is that? It looks like a golden Circle I hope that who/what that's pulling me has good Aim Otherwise all They'll get is a Shattered soul IT'S GETTING CLOSER TO ME AHHHHH!!!'

As I get closer to the Golden Circle my conscience starts to fade away. But the most amazing thing happened when I went through the Golden Circle. What was it you ask? Why not see for yourself Fades to black.