Not_Shadow

Pakistan

The story is amazing and very captivating... I am looking forward to the future events and how the story unfolds.
P.S.- great work by the hardworking author. Keep it up 👍🏻

Awesome writing style and plot. Character development and unique way of adding dimensional concept is captivating. The way story represents that anyone pushed at edge can become a devil and most powerful out there and demons can also have heart and humanity which human itself lack. The whole concept is beautifully represented. Looking forward to upcoming chapters.

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The story has a decent plot and is well narrated. The writing steal is quite unique but i think i will get used to it pretty soon. The twist are quite intriguing enough, The characters are well introduced one at a time. I think you still need some improvement in character development, adding a few more dialogues and emotions and making the fights a bit longer. I am still waiting for the next chapter .

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