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The City of God

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Chapter 1 - Chapter One: The City's Secrets

The weathered sign over the bookstore read "Sanctuary." An ironic name, Maria mused, as her shift began amidst the musty scent of old paper and the persistent worry that gnawed at her. It was only here, surrounded by fictional worlds, that she allowed herself to momentarily forget the mystery that had consumed her. The stolen notebook, an unwelcome companion far more thrilling than the classics she was meant to sort, remained tucked inside her bag.

Manila, with its relentless thrum of jeepneys and clattering street vendors, pressed against the bookstore windows. Maria couldn't linger on tales of desert wanderers like in "The Alchemist," not when the city outside pulsed with a tension all its own. It was as if the disappearances had left a phantom ache, a hollowness in the very soul of the metropolis.

Between customers – mostly students and the occasional weathered soul seeking a specific, obscure title – Maria found herself drawn to the neighborhood news posted online. Yet another missing lola (grandmother), the article proclaimed. Each detail heightened a growing sense of dread within her; the faded housedress, eyes haunted by fear, the quiet resignation etched on her family's faces.

"Looks like things won't be calming down anytime soon," Mr. Santos remarked with a sigh. He was an ever-present figure in the bookstore, his kind, wrinkled face often hidden behind the day's newspaper.

Maria hesitated before voicing the question bubbling inside her. "Mr. Santos, have you ever... felt like the city's changing? Like there's something darker happening right under our noses?"

The old man gave a wry chuckle. "My dear, every generation thinks the world's spiraling into chaos. But worry lines won't change a thing."

He was right. Practical work awaited – inventory to organize, shelves to dust. The stolen notebook, with its cryptic clues, was relegated to the back of her mind as she slipped into the familiar routine. But by mid-afternoon, an unnerving realization bloomed: not a single elderly customer had graced the store that day. It was as if an entire generation had vanished from her small, sheltered world.

When her shift finally ended, Maria couldn't shake the feeling of impending doom. The city's vibrancy felt brittle, like laughter just before a storm. She longed to confide in someone... her tired mother, her siblings too young to understand. But she carried this burden alone. 

Determined to find answers, to unravel the threads that led to the disappearances, she slipped away from the crowded streets. Her destination: the shadowed alleys of Quiapo, the place where whispers of fear echoed beneath the din of everyday life.

Dusk painted the narrow streets in shades of gray. Maria passed a sari-sari store, its shelves a riot of color against the weathered wood, and found herself drawn towards its homey glow. Inside, a plump, motherly woman bustled behind the counter. Maria's stomach rumbled, reminding her she hadn't eaten all day.

"Anything I can get for you, hija?" (daughter) the woman asked, her voice rich and warm.

"Just... a piece of pandesal, maybe?" Maria replied, fumbling for loose change.

The woman smiled, handing her a still-warm bread roll. As Maria bit into its soft center, a flicker of recognition crossed the woman's face.

"You look familiar… weren't you here yesterday? Near the alley off Trapalas Street?" 

Maria's heart skipped a beat. Was she caught?

"I… Yes," she stammered, "I think I was."

The woman lowered her voice. "Did you see her too? The old woman?"

Maria felt a jolt run through her. "You did too?" She blurted, almost dropping her precious pandesal in surprise. 

A shadow crossed the woman's face. It was the same shadow that seemed to haunt every corner of the city these days: a shared fear no one dared to speak aloud.

Maria couldn't recall the rest of her walk home, mind whirling with a mix of elation and dread. She wasn't crazy. The shopkeeper had seen the old woman too, had felt the same unease radiating off the alleyways of Quiapo. Clutching the stolen notebook tightly, she vowed to make sense of it all.

The apartment was dimly lit, her family not yet back from their daily scrambles for survival. In the solitude, the notebook's frayed cover seemed to mock her. Here was a mystery she couldn't simply escape into like the fictional worlds she adored. This was real, urgent, and far more dangerous than any tale spun on paper.

The cryptic dates, names, odd symbols… they were the scattered pieces of a puzzle, but the picture they revealed remained chillingly unclear. She tried piecing together mentions of 'the Eyes' alongside frantic notes about disappearances. Was there a clandestine group, some shadowy organization, orchestrating these vanishings? And what on earth was "the Key" the notes so often mentioned?

As the room darkened, Maria unearthed a flickering candle. Its meager light cast strange shadows, echoing the oppressive twilight of the city's underbelly. This was more than stolen glances and whispered tales - she was now playing a dangerous game, one where the stakes weren't fictional lives, but the frail figures of those seemingly forgotten. 

"Maria, is that you?" Her mother's voice broke through the silence. In an instant, Maria shoved the notebook under a stack of school papers. Elena's weary face filled the doorway, carrying a plastic bag of wilted vegetables – a stark reminder of their daily battles. 

"Just studying late," Maria mumbled, feeling a pang of guilt at her secrecy. How could she explain she was diving into a mystery that could endanger them all?

The next morning, armed with the excuse of schoolwork, she returned to Quiapo. The streets were as boisterous as ever, vendors shouting, jeepneys roaring past. But underneath the normalcy, a sense of loss hung in the air. Maria scanned the crowds, noting the absence of bent figures and slow, measured steps. Had they sensed the danger lurking in the shadows? Were they all locked away, hidden in their cramped homes?

The sari-sari store beckoned. The shopkeeper, Mrs. Benitez as Maria had learned, was sweeping the stoop.

"Back so soon, Maria?" she raised an eyebrow, amusement flickering in her eyes, "Couldn't get enough of the neighborhood?"

"Something like that," Maria hesitated, unsure where to begin. 

"You want to know about the old woman?" Mrs. Benitez didn't wait for a reply, "Not the first time she's peeked out like that... like she's being watched. Seen her do it a few times now. Always near that alley."

The alley… where Maria had heard those panicked whispers about 'them', about the all-seeing Eyes. A web of fear was being spun right before her, and she seemed to be its unwitting center. 

"Mrs. Benitez, have you... heard anything? About others disappearing?" Maria dared to ask. 

The woman's smile faltered. She leaned in, her voice barely louder than a breath. "There's talk... mostly rumors, things you hear after dark. But it's enough to scare an old woman like me." 

Maria's determination sparked. "Who would do such a thing? Why the elderly?" 

Mrs. Benitez just shrugged, a helpless gesture that seemed to sum up the city's growing despair.

As Maria stepped out of the store, she was no longer a college student escaping into books. She was a detective, albeit an amateur one, in a case far darker than any fiction could conjure. But one thing was certain: she couldn't walk away. The mystery, and the vanished, had a hold on her. 

The old jeepney coughed and sputtered its way through the heart of Manila, the afternoon sun a relentless weight on its faded yellow roof. Maria gripped the worn copy of The Alchemist in one hand, her knuckles white against the cracked cover. With the other hand, she held tightly to the metal rail, her short brown hair whipping against her face as the jeepney jolted through potholes.

Across from her, a gaggle of schoolchildren laughed uproariously, their uniforms grubby but their eyes bright. She envied them, their youthful vibrancy a stark contrast to the exhaustion seeping into her bones. She'd barely slept the night before, the clatter of her mother's late shift at the sari-sari store echoing long after she'd drifted off. 

Her stop neared, and she pushed past the children, coins jangling in her pocket as she stepped onto the cracked pavement. The university was a short walk away, imposing and gray against the relentless blue of the sky. With a sigh, she forced her tired feet forward. Just a few more classes, and then home. 

Her route took her past the estero, a narrow canal choked with water hyacinth and garbage. The stench of decay hung thick in the air, an assault to her senses. In the distance, a woman in a faded housedress knelt by the edge of the water, scrubbing clothes on a makeshift washboard. Maria hurried past, a familiar wave of unease washing over her. The estero was a place where stories whispered, tales of things lost and found, tales that were often better left unheard. 

"Ate!" (Older sister!)

A small hand tugged on her sleeve. Maria paused, startled. A young boy, no older than her little brother, looked up at her with dirt-streaked cheeks. 

"Ano 'yun?" (What's that?) he asked, pointing out across the estero. 

Maria followed his gaze. Floating amongst the refuse was an object, its shape obscured by the dirty water. A pang of dread wormed its way into her stomach.

"Is it a bundle of rags?" she asked softly, her heart pounding against her ribs. 

The boy shook his head with certainty that belied his young age. "Hindi po, ate. Hindi po basahan 'yan." (No, big sister. That's not a rag.)

She swallowed hard. People sometimes left unwanted things in the estero – old toys, broken things, things that whispered of misfortune. But this...this looked different.

Without consciously making the decision, she found herself stepping closer to the water's edge. The woman with the washboard cast her a curious glance. 

"Huwag kang masyadong lumapit," (Don't get too close) the woman warned, a rough edge to her voice. "Hindi maganda ang sinabi ng estero ngayon." (The estero is saying bad things today.)

Maria nodded in mute acknowledgment, unable to tear her eyes away from the floating object. The boy beside her whimpered, his grip on her hand tightening.

A shaft of sunlight broke through the thick clouds, illuminating the object. In that flash of clarity, Maria felt her blood run cold. It wasn't a bundle of rags; it was a hand.