John Elabaris,30 year old man,office worker,single
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Incandscence burst through the void.The veil was torned as the void collapse.
An otherworldly soul awaken,a human from the 21st century,now, a being borne from the sheer chaos of paradoxical nothingness.
He(undetermined) are here because he can be.He is here cause he is.He think,therefore he is.The blank slate of a universe(undetermined) is his.Or more specifically,it is his body.The awareness contained within his corporeal form is but a fragment of what he truly are.He look at the desolate,lifeless,and nameless universe only filled with darkness.
"perhaps a giving it a name would would be a good start?"he thought before falling in a state of trance and thinking.
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After what seems like eternity he thought 'The world is me,I am the world.....' .Before saying aloud," Your name is....Audir" Stopping for a while before continuing,"and mine is Elabaris"both of which hold no particular meaning other than the fact it sounded nice to his metaphorical ear.Which, in fact will hold one or many from now on.
The universe Audir comes into existance as his consciusness pervades every aspect of its existance.As he becomes one with the the universe,the planet begins to gain develop an identity and personality in perfect harmony as it become one with the awakened soul now also known as Elabaris in perfect harmony with the thoughts and desires of its creator.
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Audir is a beautiful cosmic universe with vast amount of galaxies filled with rougue planets and planets with its Own solar system.The stars start becoming brighter as if alive,the planets borned of him started to be teaming with life and vigor,developing lush forest and vast oceans and towering mountains,filled with diverse array of flora and fauna.It is a place of infinite possibilities and endless potential,where anything can happen and anything can exist-limited only by the imagination of its creator,Elabaris.
The soul,now known as Elabaris,has complete control over Audir,and can shape it however he desire.Elabaris could create an utupian filled with happiness and prosperity,or a dystopian hellscape,ruled by fear and oppression.
"This gonna get interesting." Elabaris thought as he giggled.
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Word count:387 words
Q:is it gud for newbie author?
Yes
No
Ps: i made the chapter way too short,ill edit it later and make it longer