Pretty self explanatory ain't it?
After having time to spend with my folks,and now that my mom and dad(who are teachers) as well as my brothers are going back to school,I can now work on this one again.
So here are some changes that I wanted to add.
1.i felt like the name arate doesn't match with the mc,so I'm thinking of giving him the name of alucard,for obvious reasons.
2.ive decided that restraint level zero wasn't a mana zone so I came up with this for restraint level origins (a restraint level for a mana zone),
I'm calling it [mana zone,restraint level origin:dead man wonderland](still working on the name and will gladly take ideas from you all.)
3.when the elves come back alucard(formerly known as Arata) will use his restraint level 19,20,and 21 to make new bodies for the elves as a breakthrough for fighting zagred.(making the elves allies for alucard and his squad)
4.alucard will tame a dragon(female dragon which can transform) by mistake in the future by accidentally making a draconic marriage proposal,and you guys get to choose which dragon I use.
5.the witch queen will be a doting grandmother who will have alucard visit her once a month due to a deal with the wizard king.
I hope you all can agree with these things,and please! Don't hesitate to give me ideas.