Good morning, evening or night to anyone that is reading this, like it says on WebNovel I'm SoyNiir the author of this fanfic.
You might be asking: "What is this shit?"
Good question.
This is the resume:
I dropped this and all my other works on hiatus after i got a work for first time, the 'responsability' I felt on that moment made myself focus on it and left this apart, besides the lost of interest on continue writing.
To be honest, back to May/April I was mad crazy about the stats showed on Inkstone (the place where the writers of WebNovel do their stuff), for me everyday was a constant madness about checking the views, comments, ratings, etc... So I basically dropped it saying all my fics went on hiatus.
Well, I'm here again with an improved English (I think.) and some new stuff on my head that i'll make on the rewrite.
I've not seen yet the new season of Arcane and I'm really excited about it due to all the edits that apeared on my fyp page of TikTok this last week, so I'll be focusing and rewriting only this fanfic. (Sorry for those that expected something from MHA: The Musician or the others (nobody reads the others hahah)).
I made some Q&A about why I'll be doing all of it again, enjoy it.
Q: Why are you rewriting all this?
A: The reason would be the entire plot I made. I never intended to do an Overpowered (broken) character from the start, I mean: 1) Spider Powers. 2) A system. 3) A symbiont 4) Being able to repare weapons, build guns and make stuff like gaunlets, he's smart but c'mon, his background is that his uncle teached him some about blacksmith, don't go crazy magically making weapons. 5) And here's the last straw, he got adaptability. You might think: 'Welp, that's okay.' And I would think the same if it only came for battles or something but I made that he could make his OWN HABILITIES by himself, example: 'Oh no! Niko(MC) is drowning!' [Bzz, System activated, the Host is facing an horrible situation, the hability 'Adaptability' is reacting. The hability 'Breath Under Water' has been developed] like WTFFFF was I writing, the sainted plot armor. And all this shit for 20 chaps straight, could you believe it?
Q: This talks about the character but no the plote, could you elaborate about that?
A: Uh, sure, sorry.(I'm writing this alone and feel like I'm the one developing something, Schizophrenia) Well, the problem were principally the relationships between the characters, too salty, I writed them like they were predeterminated to like the MC, I noe the stories are like that but I didn't intend it to happen, at least not that way. Everytime was like Niko telling his story and everybody crying about it and hugging him. It was Zaun, people is not that soft.
Another problem were the plot holes, a lot. First chap for example, out of nowhere he was magically being the coldest being beating people from a enviroment where the cruelty and violence is always present, all of it without having a fighting background or simillar stuff. Also thefact of being careless about everything not fealing weird about the idea of being dropped on a dead kids body on another world.
Also when he was about to enter the Last Drop and thought he would face the characters from the series (Vi, Powder, Claggor and Mylo) but magically the system, who I wrote he had no information about the world for the moment, was able to tell if they were there or not, like it was omniscient or something, some guy on the paragraph comment wrote justified that Aurelion gave him some info, well, sorry but that was a plot hole I made.
Finally, first time Niko went to Piltover he 'threatened' Heimerdinger, assalted a worker of the Kiramman family, like a peasant hitting a noble, courting death. All this afterhe said he wanted to go 'undercover' to the eyes of Piltover. And fucking mocking the Kiramman heir when he was about to jail besides showing he strenght carrying crazy heavy metal handcuffs and BREAKING them on the trial infront of A LOT of people of Piltover whe he said he wanted to HIDE his strenght. Well, It could be understand as a menace to make them know to not fuck with Zaun while he was out but senseless shit anyways.
For those that took their time to read this, thanks. I'll ask you to wait for it and expect a beautiful story that will make you die of hunger for new chapters.
Big hug, Niir.