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Hey, glad to see you're back too!
I'm glad that you're loving everything so far, I really do enjoy writing banter in this story, since it lends itself great to the traditionally dry, sarcasm/banter-based comedy that lends itself best to the tone of this story without compromising on having comedic moments, while not completely taking people out of the tone set by the story.
When we get to the group meeting the Gremory Peerage, oh boy is it going to be interesting. Vin being there alone is going to have to constitute a change in the character dynamics of those scenes.
Lint and Freed aren't necessarily going to meet, Freed wants nothing to do with Lint, and while Lint does consider Freed a brother, she's made peace with the fact that he's gone from her life, and is never going to come back. It would be a bit too much to shoe-horn a Lint-Freed confrontation into the story. Although she most certainly will be mentioned when Freed comes up later down the road.
I think this chapter shows that Vin… well, he may not be entirely suited to monster hunting, the guy cries over shooting a gorilla twelve times. But yeah, he'll definitely grow more and more as a person who specializes in using his words to deal with combat scenarios just as much as his skills as a fighter. In that way, he sort of resembles Azazel.
The dark side of the church was shown a little here with the argument, but ending this chapter, and going into the next, we'll definitely see more of the church's… flimsy decision making skills.
I hope you enjoy this chapter too! Your reviews always give me a lot to discuss, which is great. I hope to see you again soon, and thanks for leaving a review!
zKORN Says: (This one's about chapter 6, by the way)
"I'm back! How is everything going for you, author? I hope it's ok.
I loved today's episode and the development that has been seen, not in many fic are situations unrelated to the protagonist. Is it understood?
I mean that sometimes in a random Fic there, the protagonist is KO or something prevents him from returning and he does not develop as his absence or what has happened to the protagonist influences the development of the facts and how Characters outside the MC are affected, an example of this is the conversation between Griselda and the Doctor when Vin is unconscious but stable.
In other fics it is as if you leave MC K.O and ... that's it, there is no reaction, there is nothing.
I liked how you have captured the emotions in this chapter, and reading what you responded to my previous review I was very happy with the fact that Vin is not going to be a one-trick Pony, THANK YOU GOD AND THANK YOU AUTHOR.
I'm dying for the next chapter, and at the moment I am satisfied with this review since I have nothing to ask. (Sorry if it is too long or there are writing errors, my native language is Spanish and I am practicing my English
You have a reader from Venezuela over here who greets you. Thank you very much for the chapter!)"
Got your message loud and clear buddy! And I'm doing well, a little stressed and busy, but hey, who the hell isn't, right?
Like you said, I really do like when the main character of a fic is not the 'center of the universe', and that even when things happen even when they're knocked out, in a coma, etc. Chapter Six was a chapter that was supposed to be like a 'reaction' to the events of chapter five, if that makes any sense. We get to see Xenovia grappling with her feelings of failure and responsibility, etc. In that chapter, at least for the part where Xenovia is watching Vin's operation, Vin is sort of a piece of physical symbolism, and less so a character, if you get what I mean.
I'm glad you're happy that Vin isn't going to be a one-trick-pony, I love writing interesting things for characters to do, and I love making characters struggle a lot for any form of victory or growth, so seeing people like you be so supportive and into that makes me really happy.
I'm glad you're super satisfied with what's on offer for this fic, and now you have a whole new chapter to enjoy! Also, shout-out to all the homies in Venezuela, you all rock! Thanks for leaving the review, especially since I imagine it takes a lot of work to put together since English isn't your first language. I sure know that I couldn't do that myself, so mad props to you! I hope to see you here again!
Tyrant Overlord Killidia Says:
"These goonish idiots here were neat. They're not a real threat to our group of heroes (though they are a threat to normal people) and would get slaughtered by all of the heavy hitters in the DxD universe. They're effectively bit part bad guys because of it and it's kinda welcome to see something like this in a setting where most fights will have supernatural abilities being used by both sides."
Yeah, the Goon Squad possibly rank as the weakest DxD villains ever to be put into a fanfiction. Possibly. I don't know.
Either way, they were oddly refreshing to write. In a world of villains who want to do crazy shit like start wars, revive god-like beings, and force marriages, it's novel to see a group of idiots just trying to make some good ol' fashioned dirty money. They're kinda like the Team Rocket (Game Version) of the DxD world. They're here to do crime, steal shit, and make money.
Ah, rest in peace, Goon Squad. We hardly knew you before you all were destroyed by a boy wearing an excessive amount of rings, and a girl with a buster sword…
Glad you enjoyed the little fight there, and I hope that you enjoy this chapter! It was great to see you here again, and I hope that I get to read more reviews from you in the future!
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