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Cain Silver enters a grand ballroom dressed in his elegant tuxedo and classy top hat. All the guests whisper behind their drinks and look at him with a curious, yet envious look. Cain is unfazed by the stares and looks, confident and stylish, a smile on his face. He makes his way to the dance floor, enjoying the atmosphere.
A beautiful lady approaches him, and he holds out his hands for a dance. As they begin to sway to the beat, Cain secretly pulls a small package out of his pocket and presses it into her hand. She stares at him incredulously, speechless at the unexpected gesture. Cain continues to dance with the lady, making small talk. She is still surprised by what he has given her, but she does not want to ruin the mood, so she politely accepts the package and continues dancing. Cain subtly keeps an eye on her, making sure she doesn't drop the package. They continue with the conversation as they move around the dance floor. Cain's mind is filled with thoughts of the heist he is about to pull off. As the night wears on, Cain continues dancing with different ladies. Each time he secretly presses a small package into their hand. Each package contains the same note, a mysterious request that has left the ladies intrigued. Cain is enjoying himself, a smile on his face. None of the ladies feel like they have been robbed, and all of them feel intrigued by the mysterious request. Cain's smile never fades, his mind set on his daring plan. Cain continues throughout the night, dancing with more and more ladies and covertly handing out the packages. He is in his zone, enjoying the night and his plan. The ladies are getting more and more curious about the mysterious request. Cain keeps dancing and socializing with them, keeping up appearances as a gentleman and a socialite. The guests are getting more and more distracted by the ball, but Cain is laser-focused on what he is doing. Cain slowly and carefully steals a piece of jewelry from each woman he has danced with, stashing it away in his suit. He works quickly and efficiently, the ball acting as such a good distraction for the ladies. Cain slowly makes his way through the ladies, each piece of jewelry he steals adding to his already impressive stash. Cain heads to a trash bin, where he carefully empties out all the jewelry he has stolen. He quickly removes his tuxedo and top hat, and puts on a disguise to look like a custodian. He looks completely different and unrecognizable to anyone who has seen him that night. He casually heads to a back door, his plan complete.
He heads out the back door, heading off into the city, disappearing into the night. No one suspects anything. Cain's plan was flawless. The ladies were none the wiser. Cain leaves the back door, taking the trash bag filled with stolen goods with him. He heads to his car, placing the bag in the trunk. He turns on the ignition and pulls away, driving through the city.
Soon, Cain reaches a casino. He gets out of his car, dressing back into his elegant suit and tie. He walks into the casino, and heads straight for the high rollers table. Cain walks into the casino, towards the high rollers table. He carefully scans the people at the tables, looking for the perfect target. He finds a man playing a game, his wallet in his front pocket. Cain stealthily walks passed, sliding his hand into the man's pocket. He quickly takes out the wallet, his skill perfect. He then leaves the table, walking around and looking for another target. Cain continues through the tables, looking for more opportunities. He finds another man, playing a game as well. This one is more aware, and has his wallet in his back pocket. Cain stealthily picks the pocket as well, taking out the wallet and stealing the contents. He then leaves the table, and searches out another target.
He does this a few more times, stealing from the players at the tables without any alarm being raised. Everyone is too focused on their games to notice. Cain moves like a ghost, a professional thief. Cain leaves the casino silently, taking the stolen wallets with him. He heads to his car, placing the wallets in the trunk. He then drives away, his day a success so far. He has stolen over tens of thousands of dollars worth of jewelry, and hundreds of dollars from the casino. Cain pulls into a dark neighbourhood, parking the car. He then gets out, and heads over to a different vehicle that is parked nearby. He opens the car door, getting into the driver's seat. He starts the engine, ready to switch vehicles and leave what he has done behind him. Cain drives onto the highway, leaving as much distance between him and the city as possible. He keeps the radio on, listening to some pleasant tunes. He is thinking about his crimes, his plan, and what he has accomplished. But he has no intention of looking back, and he is glad to be leaving it behind him. He is ready for a fresh start.