(I've tweaked the previous section featuring Willow God and Jiang Hui a bit, take a look and see if it reads more smoothly now.)
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"Others may not know your reality, but I, the old man, do. Your body is inscribed with a Killing Formation, and you have already reached the extreme in the Array Realm, surpassing the ancients. Even some old ancestors look favorably upon you. Although you have cultivated an Immortal Qi, the Immortal Ancient Method is still not suitable for you.
Look at Longbow Yan, Wang Xi and others, the ones with the least talent amongst them have already achieved two Immortal Qis. The Ten Crown King, Banished Immortal, and others have reached three Qis, their presence akin to a dragon amongst people.
Listen to the elder, choose the Law of Life, this path is destined to shine because of you!"
The lecturing elder talked eloquently, rendering Xiao Pang speechless, unable to find his bearings.
