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"Take me to him," Yusuf said as the lackey in front of him kissed his teeth, hissing at Yusuf as he guided him to Jonas.
In Jonas's bedroom, Sar'har stood at the balcony, looking out into the streets where guards occasionally glanced at the building because they knew who lived there.
Jonas, however, the owner and main target of those occasional glances, could be seen drinking more liquor at the bar stationed on the right side of the room. His face lacked its former countenance, and a knock was heard at his door.
Turning back to look at the door, Sar'har smelled a familiar scent as she walked towards it, Jonas not even bothering to acknowledge her, his former mindset fully cleansed.
Opening the door, she was met with the familiar face of Yusuf, his indifferent demeanor seeming like what she needed, as she felt uncomfortable around Jonas's wallow in self-pity.
