Lone_Courier69

upon opening his eyes the MC found himself in the land of the five great nations... 

As a child of the.. fourth hokage?

isaac, with the power of a JJK Template system to aid him on his journey, is left to find his own place in a world of shinobi.

[warning]: there will be cursing and sexual content in this story. readers below the age of 17 please be advised.

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What kind of snot and tears, what kind of forced drama, what kind of beta mc, what a disappointing main character, I hope after this he will become calmer and more indifferent, and kill his parents, including Jiraiya and all the residents and ninjas in the village, otherwise this fic complete disappointment and I'll have to throw this fic in the trash

My God, this author must be a newbie to make so many plot holes and forced plots, the guy doesn't even respect the original characters.....................................

So much drama for a fic revolving around super powered ninjas going to war like you’d think author was writng a fanfic on a sitcom with the way he forces plot development ruins original characters and creates plot holes the size of Authors weird fetish to make his mc the most hideous creature alive 



The mc isn’t actually a curse but a b and can’t really do anything with himself because he’s a emotional person that’s forced to care about others 

It’s funny because if the story was more about the mc feeling lonely and going through something rather than him being a curse or acting like one 

I don’t recommend the story because the people the mc was supposed to dislike was suddenly important to him and that’s forced besides that the mc should at least be influenced by being a curse but isn’t so it’s like you’re supposed to be this person that only does things for himself but what you get is someone who doesn’t really care about himself and does things for others 



Are you gonna drop it? It's too early to decide, you know? Bah, coming from me who barely updates his fanfic. 😂

Finally a Naruto story that has a coherent power level!  not people placing ninjas that can't even handle 5kg properly!  I discovered this story today and I'm loving it, and I really liked the writing style!  Besides, it's been a while since I read an AU that has Minato and Jiraya as a villain!.... and finally, to top it off, the story just didn't get 5 stars due to the instability I'm seeing when posting chapters

Like what I am seeing so far will change based on how it's going also I like the fact that you didn't start hating the monkey and kissing Minatos boots keep it up

Just finished reading current chapters. Really liking it so far! Hope you don’t drop this. Just wondering if he will be on good terms with Kushina? I’m itching to read what will happen lol.

I think the author made a mistake with the template and how much influence it has on the mc, it affects his personality as well as his appearance. 

Chaoter 7 and he has black teeth, blue skin and jogos eyes 💀💀, he also seems to be despising humans 

Hello author I wanted to know if there is harem in this novel?

I've read 24 chapters of this, all that are currently available, this story has so much potential it's crazy... but the flow of the story is all off, Mc's personality  changes at the drop of a hat, there's more plot holes then chapters, the every choice the author makes makes me like this story less

so good, only 17 chapters and I don’t think there gonna be anymore anytime soon. Only thing I didn’t like was him crying at the end after saying he didn’t actually care at all ( I don’t like dramatic character development in the mc personally ) honestly I wanna see more death and destruction 

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must say I'm very into this. A lot of flavors that mix together well and really add to the story

It's been a long time since I've seen such a good Naruto/abandonment story, the MC reflects very well the personality of someone who grew up in a hostile environment, I really look forward to continuing reading. 

it had a potential but you F'ed it up...
trash ... GARBAGE 🗑️🗑️🗑️...

Plot holes that are bigger than this planet, like, holy cow, not only that but everything is so forced and so stupid that is beyond normal, it actually had potential, however author just destroyed everything like a child using ultimate generation phone and putting it in a microwave to see what would happen.

Not only that but the amount of edginess in this fic is crazy, like, is so edgy that could probably split atoms, is just edgy for the sake of being edgy.

please don't drop it and if you do at least give us the original this is good

this is really good. its a shame if the author decide to drop

Olá queria , escreve esse mensagem para a autor/autora  , sua fanfic e bem única gostei da história, gostei de como as coisas estão indo e como o MC lida como suas questões, espero que que ele posso evoluir ainda mais para ficar mais forte e que ele tem pelo menos um bom final, não posso da muito opinião pq não sia quase nada de histórias, mas espero que continue com a história e não abandonea .

Obrigado pelas capítulos 

Naruto: the forsaken