Disclaimer :
1. I am not a native english speaker
2. Because this is my first story (book), if you want me to rewrite this story its okay for me
3. I havent read the Novel yet (only anime)
4. Is there anyone here who wants to help me become a beta reader for my story?
5. You can comment like make a correction if i using english incorrectly
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" Talking Normally "
' Thinking '
< When Rimuru Talking with Ciel (no one can hear Rimuru and Ciel) or with other using Thought Communication >
<< Ciel (Rimuru Manas) Talking Pattern >>
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In Cardinal World (specifically in the Jura Tempest Federation) there is someone is thinking about vacation, his name is Rimuru Tempest. Since after the Tenma War was won by Rimuru's side, he want to refreshing his mind beside dong some paperwork in his office
Rimuru Tempest POV
Rimuru Tempest currently sitting in his office using his human form and he want to finish his paperwork and slurping tea made by Shuna
Rimuru : < Nee Ciel-san, after i finish this paperwork i think i want to discuss about something together, what do you think? >
Ciel : << Yes of course Master, but what will we talk about later? >>
Rimuru : < Well i think i want to planning a vacation >
Ciel : << I see, if this Master wishes then i'll follow you, but what kind of vacation Master? >>
Rimuru : < My plan for vacation is going to another universe > i said excitedly
Ciel : << Okay Master, then we will talk about that after Master finish these paperwork >>
Rimuru : < Yes yes, but can you help me because this work can be finished more quickly? >
Ciel : << No, i cant help Master because this is your duty >>
Rimuru : < Hai hai > i said with a bit dissapointment
Ciel : << *sigh* >>
And then i cut off communication with Ciel and continue his work
And finally after 5 minutes, i finally finished his paperwork
Rimuru : ' Finally i can rest after this tiring job '
Ciel : << Good job master >> She said proudly
Rimuru : < Thank you Ciel - san >
Ciel : << Hehe >> She said with giggling
Rimuru : " Anyway, i think i want vacation but using anime, manga and light novel as my references "
Ciel : << Okay Master >>
And then i take some manga and (light) novel references from my Imaginary space
Rimuru : " Well then before i start choose which world i want to stay in the you created Ciel -san, i have my personal reference fo this "
Ciel : << Personal reference?what kind of reference Master? >>
Rimuru : " I want go to earth but not only about Slice of Life (normal) type "
Ciel : << Can you explain any further Master? >>
Rimuru : " I have my criteria Ciel - san, i'll choose between : zombie apocalypse, an environment where the people have some kind of superpower or some invasion "
Coel : << Wait Master, you know i have interest about creating an universe with these criteria thanks to Master >> She said excitedly
Rimuru : " Okay then, lets get started "
Then i take a novel book from my imaginary space by title "Shakugan no shana" to the table
Rimuru : " What do you think Ciel - san? "
Ciel : << Before we contine, i want to do something first Master >>
Before Rimuru want to ask the question, Ciel then materialize herself using physical body
Ciel : << Master, this will make thing more easier >> She said while smiling
Rimuru : " O-okay Ciel - san, so do what do you think or do you have any interest with this franchise? " I said while blushing a bit
Ciel " << According to my analysis, i have a interest about this "Fuzetsu" thing Master >>
Rimuru : " Ho, can you explain? "
Ciel : << Based on my analysis, this "Fuzetsu" will create a dome-shaped isolated space which is detached from the flow of cause and effect of the world, with its interior area frozen and concealed from the outside >>
Rimuru : " I see, do you want to make this one to the top list before you creating the unverse? >>
Ciel : << I dont sure, maybe after you give another preference Master >>
Rimuru : " I see " I said while leaned in my chair
Before we continue something happen, someone came to my room out of nowhere
??? : " Hmm, where am i? "
Then this person look to Rimuru and Ciel
??? : " Pleased to meet you Rimuru - san, and you are? "
Ciel then look angry, but i calmed her then i spoke
Rimuru : " Her name is Ciel, so who are you and what do you want? " said while being serious
??? : " I see, okay then my name is Author and i am a messenger "
Rimuru : " Before continue, please take a seat "
Then Author - san take a seat in left of my seat
Author : " Thank you Rimuru - san "
Rimuru : < Ciel - san, do you think this person have an evil intention? >
Ciel : << I dont think this person has an evil intention Master >>
Rimuru : < But why the Tempestian can't sense this persn? >
Ciel : << According to my analysis, this invidual named Author have a very thin aura >>
(A / N : Reference from Kuroko from Kuroko Basket)
Rimuru : < Hmm, i see then dont worry about that Ciel - san >
Ciel : << Okay Master >>
Rimuru : " Okay then Author - san, what kind of message do you bring? "
Author : " i have this envelope " Then he give it to me
You can see the name from this envelope : 'From Anshin'in - san or Najimi Ajimu' , who is this person?
Rimuru : " Anshin'in - san?who is this person Author - san? "
Author : " I'll give a picture of this person then "
Rimuru : " Hmm, i see "
Ciel : << Master >> she said while bit angry and jealous
Author : " I'll stop give you this picture " he said while looking at Ciel
(A / N : I will tell you the contents of the message in the next chapter or maybe haha)
Author : " By the way, i want to make an agreement to you Ciel - san and Rimuru - san "
Author : " I want you Ciel - san to make Rimuru - san gender when he got reincarnated is male "
And then i feel happy but Ciel - san seems shocked
Ciel : << What? >> She said while being angry
Rimuru : ' I dont like this tension '
Author : " How about we discuss this matter private Ciel - san? "
Ciel : << Hmm >> She then sighed << Okay then, Master please stay here >>
Rimuru : ' For some reason, i dont like the direction about this conversation '
Rimuru : " Wait Ciel - san " i said while being nerveous
Ciel : << Dont worry Master >> she said calmly and then looking at the Author - san while smiling coldly
Author : " *sigh* "
Ciel POV
Author : " Then i'll using Void space for our discussion Ciel - san "
Ciel : << Fine, whatever >> i said coldly
Then we enter void space together, and in the void space
Ciel : << So, what do you really want? >>
Author : " when i said before, well i dint really mean by that "
Ciel : << What do you mean? >>
Author : " I'll give you a contract agreement, but basically you stil have a chance to create a world with female Rimuru " he said while smiling a bit
Ciel : << Heeeh, what you will do? >>
Author : " I'll give you an extra power to create another when you creating universe, but dont worry i wont disturb you on this one "
Ciel : << You serious, right? >>
Author : " Yeah i'm serious " he said while being serious
Author : << I'll give you the contract >> Then he give me the contract
The agreement :
1. I (Author) will prevent Ciel - san to Make Rimuru Tempest - san gender to female for this version while you two (Ciel - san and Rimuru Tempest - san) make the new universe
2. I (Author) wont distrub Rimuru Tempest - san and escpecially Ciel - san for creating the new universe for second version etc (after point no. 1)
Ciel : << You will keep your promise right? >>
Author : " Yes, i understand this very well " 'Good gief, you know you have a similiarities with Luminous Valentine for this kind of thing i think' (A / N : CMIIW)
Author : "Dont worry about this, you know i have interest as well for Rimuru - san to become a female when he reincarnated to another world "
Ciel : " Very well, lets go back " The i put the contract into the imaginary space
Then he open the potal back to the office, then we back to the office
Rimuru Tempest POV
After i prepare books while waiting for Ciel - san and Author - san for a few minutes while nerveous for Ciel - san safety (i dont know about Author - san capabilities), then they are finally back
Rimuru : " So what happen Ciel - san? "
Ciel : << It went well Master >>
Author : " Rest assured Rimuru - san, this went smoothly "
Rimuru : " You dont do anything weird, arent you Author - san? " I said while bit angry
Author : " *sigh* of course not Rimuru - san "
Author : " Well then i'll go back, thank you for your time Rimuru - san and Ciel - san "
Rimuru : " Do you have a interest to stay at Jura Tempest, Author - san? "
Author : " I'll consider it, good bye "
And then Author - san disappear into thin air
Rimuru : " What are you doing Ciel - san with that person? "
Ciel : << Dont worry about it Master "
Rimuru : " *sighed in defeat* okay then, lets continue "
And then we discuss about :
1. Medaka Box
2. Cardfight Vanguard
3. Parasyte The Maxim
4. Gintama
5. Durarara
6. Zoom 100
7. Danganronpa
8. Fate
9. To - Love Ru
10. Madoka Magica
11. Dark Gathering
etc
And finally, i discussing about To aru franchise (in the table : Light Novel Old Testament Vol 2 and To aru no Kagaku Mental Out manga)
Rimuru : " What do you think Ciel - san? "
Ciel : << I think this franchise is perfect Master >>
Rimuru : " Oho, why is that? " i said while being interested in Ciel - san answer
Ciel : << According to my analysis, this verse power system really unique because of 2 sides : Magic side and Science/esper side, for me specific i prefer Science side rather than Magic side because of variation that esper skill can do, altough the Magic side seems not bad >> She said excitedly
Ciel : << But i need to warn you especially about a certain person >>
Rimuru : " Who is that, Ciel - san? >>
Ciel : << According to my analysis, this invidual is called Aleister Crowley as Board Chairman/General Superintendent >>
Rimuru : " Why is that, Ciel - san? >>
Cile : << To put it a simple way, he was a manipulator, which is this person have a similiar problem with Clayman and Yuuki >> (A / N : CMIIW)
Rimuru : " Okay then i'll careful, lets make a meeting for this matter Ci- "
Someone interupted me and Ciel - san, for knocking a door
??? : *knock**knock* " Lord Rimuru may i come in? "
Ciel : << I'll go back to your body Master >>
Rimuru : < Okay Ciel - san >
And then Ciel - san disappear into my body, after that i spoke
Rimuru : " You can come "
Shuna : " I want to take tea cup Lord Rimuru, and i'm amazed you finished your paperwork " she said happily
Rimuru : " Of course Shuna, by the way can you call the executive because i want to make a meeting "
Shuna : "Of course Lord Rimuru, but what do you want to talk about? " she said while being curious
Rimuru ; " You will see "
Shuna : " I understand Lord Rimuru, i'll send the message right away "
And then she left the room
Rimuru : ' I wonder about what will await for me in that universe 'i thought while leaning in the back of my chair
-- To be continued --
For my curiousity :
- I am curious about Rimuru interaction with Level 5 (canon) characters
- If the Mental Out trying to control Rimuru, what do you think will happen?
- I am curious about Rimuru interaction with Misaka sisters (especially after Sisters arc : Touma vs Accelerator in canon story)
- I am curious about Rimuru x Index relationship
- I am curious about Rimuru x Othinus (New Testament) relationship
- (WHAT IF) Octagram member goes to To aru verse, what will happen?
What do you think about this book/story potential?