Rewrite is up.
Better grammar, a changed story, and more scenes with goosebumps.
Also, the rewrite is what it is, meaning it is not a reposting as I initially intended but a rewrite.
Nearly 50% of the story events have been deleted as of chapter eight, and new events have taken place in their place.
You could read this and the rewrite, but I promis the rewrite to be the better one.