From the beginning, what I was most dissatisfied with was the character setting for the mother, Ye Shuxian. This was a flaw. Additionally, An Na's unrequited love was also a shortcoming. In fact, setting up An Na with unrequited love could still be acceptable, but the problem was that I shouldn't have introduced Li Lixue and Dong Wan as confidantes without developing that kind of relationship. I believe, had it been so, this book might have been more outstanding.
Also, in terms of pacing, overall, I am not satisfied with how it was handled in the early stages of the story. Older Brother took steps too quickly. Even though it was exciting, I admit that I didn't write with enough detail or depth, which led to the story becoming unmanageable, like a wild horse breaking free from its reins. This is Old Cai's greatest regret.
