Evil_Monologue

I couldn't care about a synopsis so I asked chat gpt:

In a twist of fate, college student Ishiro Yamanaka is thrust from a mundane science experiment into a mysterious ninja-like world. Struggling to adapt to a place where ancient traditions and mystical powers reign, Ishiro must navigate new challenges and alliances. His journey becomes not just a quest to return home, but a voyage of self-discovery, revealing inner strengths in a land where fantasy and reality blur. "[Your Novel's Title]" is a captivating tale of adventure and resilience, where an ordinary student's life transforms into an extraordinary journey.

yeah, this. it's a bit wrong but, oh well.


P.S: I making this so I can get better at writing, so there's a lot of beats that belong to other, better-made, stories. Hope you don't mind that.

Also, but not also. I did this so I can get, some level of feedback on my writing. Most people I know just compliment everything I write. So I would love if you could give some feedback, even if it's just a roast. Well, specially if is just a roast.

also also: 4 new chapters per week

it's pretty good, honestly. Although every single character does seem to be more interesting than the protagonist.

It's a good read honestly, the goal seems simple but the journey is entertaining. But i do think that there are far too much action, it would do much good to have more quieter moments in between all the stuff

Um, no chapter today. I'm actually changing the schedule; instead of the previous (Monday, Tuesday, Thursday, Friday) - I'm going to be releasing a new chapter every other day.

Actually, no. Not bye. Tell me, what are you guys thinking of the story so far? Would love to hear your opinion, your honest opinion.

...Yep. That's it now. See you later.

This 5 star review is solely for that [YOUR NOVEL'S TITLE] in the synopsis. I find it hilariously funny

 I couldent care so i asked chat gtp:  Title: "A Mundane Odyssey"

Review:

In the perplexing realm of literary endeavors, there are instances when an author's indifference towards their own creation becomes glaringly evident. Such is the case with "[Your Novel's Title]," where the synopsis itself is a testament to the author's nonchalant approach.

The protagonist, Ishiro Yamanaka, is unceremoniously thrust into a world that seems to lack the imaginative spark needed to captivate readers. The description reeks of a lackadaisical attitude, as if the author begrudgingly threw together a mishmash of worn-out tropes without a care for originality or ingenuity.

The promise of a "captivating tale of adventure and resilience" falls flat when the author openly acknowledges borrowing heavily from other, presumably superior, stories. It's almost as if they are waving a white flag, admitting that their work is a mere collage of elements borrowed from more accomplished works, devoid of the creative energy required to make it stand on its own.

The audacious statement that the author "couldn't care about a synopsis" is a bold declaration of apathy. It raises the question of why readers should invest their time and attention in a story that the creator himself appears disinterested in promoting. If the person behind the narrative doesn't care about presenting a compelling and enticing premise, why should potential readers care about delving into the lackluster world of Ishiro Yamanaka?

While seeking feedback is a commendable endeavor, the author's nonchalant attitude towards their own work is a glaring issue. Writing is an art form that demands passion, dedication, and a genuine desire to connect with the audience. Without these elements, "[Your Novel's Title]" risks being dismissed as a forgettable endeavor, lost in the vast sea of literature where indifference is the quickest route to obscurity.

So, as the author of this story, it seems only fitting that I use this opportunity to grant myself a five-star review. Of course.And to say that releases are: Monday, Tuesday, Thursday and Friday.And... yeah, that's it. If needed I'll update this post.

Good story. But the other characters POV seems to be so much more interesting than the protagonist.
Like, the one scene with Neji's dad is so much better than the entire scape thing earlier.

I'm giving it five stars.If anyone is reading this, listen to me - the beginning is rocky but in like ten chapters it becomes awesome. Like, really awesome.

Of all the three webnovel's I read this was... somehow, not the worse. It was engaging, dumb and kinda fun.






P.S: I'll be back later to update my opinion.

Nem li td ainda, só to fazendo a review pra que essa fic tenha estrelss

Great story author-san, keep it going!!!!

So, as I'm absolutely not the author's alt-count, i came here to give a definitely unbiased review. And after reading it, it seems only fitting that I use this opportunity to grant not-myself a brilliant five-star review.

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I think the author would've been better off just writing their own story.

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Volume 1

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