Song of the Stars

I remember the day of the first contact, a night when I was in awe of its beauty and splendor. The shooting stars, the wonderful colors that decorated the night, a spectacular feast for the eyes in contrast to the nightmare that humanity was about to experience... This is a story I write for the purpose of fun and hobby it is purely amateurish. Please write the things I did wrong and your requests about the story. Also English is not my native tongue, so sorry about the gramatical errors that you are going to see during the story. It would be very cool if you write the gramatical errors, so I can fix them.