Tip_Ror

I didn't finish so you will not get ending so don't read. And it was shit

Just another useless opinion from an arrogant guy(or not?):-The narrative felt a little too fast-paced, but that could be because I'd been reading a few slow-paced ones; still, the father appeared to be actually waiting for his son to cough out loud.Good writing, rather classic yet well depicted.

It’s been a long time, but I’m ready to start reading again.

<p>I dropped this because I wrote like shit</p>

Single female leads to the better end my friend. Harems are boring to death.

Love the buildup and character development really intriguing

so far the novel has been very good I enjoy the Mc and the way he acts and how arrogant he is I think we need more first person pov cause I would like to know what he did over that month and how stronger he got and I love that he's becoming a deranged monster and hopefully a nightmare lord with his own unique abilities maybe to absorb other nightmare abilities or to get stronger with erosion instead of it being a debuff and maybe in the end he can become the god of nightmares

This is a really good book.I’m sure lots of other reviews detail the main character Aster so I’m gonna focus on the other stuff. First of all I absolutely LOVE the scenery. Maybe it was just my imagination going wild but I could just [img=Relaxed] the area. Second of all the plot is really intriguing. It has a lot of things you wouldn’t see elsewhere, for example goblins being extremely rare and valuable creatures. I don’t want to spoil but it adds a nice original touch to the novel. After all it’s not everyday you see a book like this one, for me at least, this was a really great look at something new. It’s really sad that the Novel stopped though… I could imagine so many different things that could come up. Seeing more nightmare lords, haveing the devs do more stuff as Aster changes things off track, and ofcourse offering explanations on how Aster ended up in the game in the first place. I would really recommend the book, even if it’s incomplete it’s great nonetheless.

I enjoy the book it has a lot of interesting developments definitely recommend a read sometimes the character feels a bit one demensional like you kinda expect what he will do next but it is a refresher from typical ones you see. It has a very good world building that has a lot of elements but are explained well. Author did a good job and I hope he keeps it up.

As much as I love the world that the author has created I do have some issues woth the writting quality.At some point around after the main character left the mansion the quality of writting turned more or less to the quality of an mtl. I am saying this as the first few chapters were very will written in terms of quality. The author himself also stated there would be no face slapping young master moments and while it is a semi valid statement there are mentions of kowtowing aswell as a young master antagonisimg the mc.Story itself and the world building itself is fairly good. I love the mix of magic, 1600s type architecture and mixed technology from the late 1800s to early 1700s.Anyway, tl;dr all in all. Good setting, similar to LoM in some ways, system and from what I know there will be players later. Bad parts are the grammar, wording in some parts, gender getting confused and things like characters knowning about kowtowing in a medieval european type setting that isn't earth.

Kudos to you brah great 👌 Book 📚📚📚 Pls keep up the steady release

Mistaken Final Boss

Table of contents

Volume 1 :Before The Start

Chapter 1 - A Sickly Body