As the name suggests, temporary note. Will be deleted after serving its purpose.
I'm thinking of redrafting this FF.
Not rewriting or anything. I feel like making another DC Young Justice FF with the same character, name and slight changes to his abilities.
Perhaps an actual backstory this time.
Apart from that, the whole story will be different and might take a different theme altogether.
Not doing it now though. Just felt I could have made this book better, so what do you think?
New thought that just popped into my head. So decided to write it down.
That aside, The main reason for this TN is because I wanted your ideas on powerful abilities that aren't too powerful.
Basically, not too weakened and not overly powerful.
DC/Marvel type world.
Can't find a superpower that satisfies me that isn't a 'Gamer System' or 'Gacha System's or 'Template System' or plain system for that matter.
Either that or the regular abilities just don't sit well with the world itself.
Or it doesn't fit with the storyline.
The only thing I could come up with so far that I actually like is [Equivalent Exchange] and that still doesn't sit well with me.
Anyway, been a long time since I posted here.
Any replies will be appreciated.