Ashcel

In the World that Contradicts Peace, Liam Regere is a sss rank player who fights inside the dungeon. Then, out of the blue, he wakes up in a world where technological advancement reigns.

In a world utterly different from his own, will he fall into the abyss of the unknown, or will he find his way back home? What things may uphold, and how will he make his mark—or will he?

Philippines

Your chapter is gripping and exciting. The switch from battle to the lab is intriguing. A few dialogue tweaks and more scene details could help, but it's a solid start that keeps readers hooked.

PARALLELA