saiyajinprime_9000

This novel is about a teenager who has no friends and is also a victim of bullying in school. Can he overcome his loneliness and bullying

okay now time for review , well I saw some minor mistakes as read more and more , there are some grammatical mistakes and repeating phrases like he said he said , the. he then he like there are many other options also it feels like rushed in the end , as dog part is significantly small and there the word toss can be replace by something gentle it shows kindness of the mc , you can go deeper and deeper if you think about human thinking pattern btw good start.

Nice, thanks for your feedback i will try my best to improve on those areas

hnnnn this review system of this application is flawed , but story is amazing 🤩 you can improve as you overcome your weakness.

Excellent story!!! It's really good and the ending is also great. The most interesting part was the middle one where his friend betrayed him. I can relate to the boy because I truly don't have a best friend irl. I have some friends irl but nobody truly understands me, my online friends are really good but I don't have any fun in real life.

A Lonely teenagers incomplete story

Table of contents

Volume 1

Chapter 1 - Chapter 1