Currently, due to a review that has come to my attention and a painful reading of dark history I have come to the conclusion.
The first part of the story has to be scrapped entirely.
The Good news is that the cringe worthy parts only begun when I made him greet new people.
The bad news is that I completely forgot about them until now.
Also, due to various things, I have decided to write a hell divers fan fic, the synopsis is below.
The story follows an amnesiac hell diver who goes by the name of Michael. Given the treatment of a popsicle, the technicians responsible for his cryo pod seemed to have made a few mistakes as he was frozen to the point of erasing a few memories. Now a blank slate who barely remembers his past, he takes action in the super destroyer amongst hell divers and learns of the many circumstances surrounding super earth and the dangers of those going against Liberty and Democracy. What was he going to do when dropped in a terminid colony, bot factory and rebel outpost?
I honestly have no idea why I'm doing this to myself when the exams are so close.