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Chapter 54 - Chapter 50 : The attention Seeking goes too far

Recap: System defeated all the enemies, and then took the dog to vet against it's wishes, All while crystal was left standing in shock, Because that day she found out the correct reason why her father gave her that order, Daniel park has a outstanding talent in fighting, While Daniel beat the guys away someone was recording all it. The reason for the recording is unknown, But soon we will find out.

Story starts here: 

Doctor "Well she is mostly weak from not eating and some minor injuries, Which mostly might be from her living conditions, She has no illness or any thing else like that, But just to be safe we gave her the necessary injections. Just give her food on time she will be well". 

Hearing the doctor's words, system nodded seeing the clean dog with golden fur. System was holding the dirty scarf. Which the dog looked at intently. But still system kept it out of her reach, After the doctor checked her, And gave him the approval to take her home. 

Taking her home, The dog was really unwilling and kept struggling. But still system didn't let her go, To calm her down he spoke "Well calm down after you will okay, I will let you go, Didn't you heard what the vet said the babies are healthy but if you kept starving yourself the babies might be in danger". Hearing his words. 

The dog seemed to understood and stopped struggling. Taking her home, System was unaware of the impact that his fight with the bullies has brought, Someone used his self-defense as a war tactic to gain attention. 

The attention which he craved, while he was heading home with the dog in his arms, The scene changes to a dark room, Which was being illuminated by only the computers light. The man kept typing furiously on the keyboard. After a while of typing the room was sent into silence.

The only sounds which were in the room were of biting nails and murmuring, "What else should I add to bring more attention, Shin daehoon, That fucking bastard gains attention without even doing anything, He gains attention, are people stupid, But I also found it a way to gain attention".

for those of you wondering, Shin daehoon is a famous pacebook star, which is a little time gangster. He promoted himself as a rich guy living like a thug. This guy hated him with every fiber of his being, Because he wanted to be same as them. But whatever he did he was ignored, But today when he was heading home. He accidentally came across Daniel park. 

The guy who was known as the pretty face of fashion department, Wasn't only pretty, But also a beast after the guys saw what he did to Zeus at the autumn camp everyone was scared of him, He became the dark horse of the school. 

Some approved of his actions, some despised them but no one dare say anything on his face since his return, Where ever he walked everyone looked at him, The level of attention is what he wanted, He wanted to be on the level of daniel park. 

But today when he saw him, His delusion to reach his level was broken, Daniel park's level, He will never reach it, Because he was the embodiment of a perfect human, He was tall handsome, Muscular, He had the perfect body and looks that will make any girl fall in love or make it so hard to forget him. 

But Daniel didn't used his looks for anything like that, But he used them to protect and assure others, He couldn't comprehend the reason for him to do such things. But today he saw it, In his eyes the looks does not matter to him. 

So he made up his mind, If daniel won't use it to get famous, He will use it to get famous, By using his name and face he will reach beyond Daniel park, So this was his first step towards greatness. He edited the vid to remove the dog and kept only the fight uploading it.

He kept refreshing the page to see if the likes or comments are there. But he didn't see anything new, This disappointed him, So he shut off his computer and went to sleep. Unaware that his dream to be famous will soon be achieved. 

While he went to sleep, Unaware about the result of tomorrow, We move away from our attention seeker, Turing our attention to another person who was part of that day,

Crystal choi we see her in a different body, As she sat in a car driven by someone all too familiar to us, Unable to forget the scene of the alley, As it kept weighing on her mind, Seeing the look on crystal's face. 

The man wearing glasses with black hair and a scar between his eyes. He spoke to her while driving "What's on your mind, crystal before your try to deny anything, I know when a person is bothered about something, So mind telling me who's bothering you".

After saying that he looks at the front mirror of the car as his glasses reflects the on coming car lights. It hard for anyone to identify where he's looking. Hearing his words of observation about her, Crystal gets a bit flustered. 

But responds quickly to ease any miss understanding, "It's nothing, Just a random thought in my head, Nothing to be worried about brother gun". Hearing her response, Gun stops pursuing this matter. 

But after a while of silent ride, Crystal spoke asking gun a question "Do you think that someone of my age can be strong as you or even stronger?". Hearing her question Gun's eyebrow rose, Because he knows she doesn't ask any useless questions. 

But he answered it "Who knows the world is way to big for me to answer it, But did you encountered any one like that, If yes do you know where he is currently". Hearing Gun's answer she looks at the front mirror to answer him.

But seeing the wild smile on his face, Crystal stops her words, Because she doesn't want him to visit the school and tear the whole school apart, Just to find him. so she refrains form answering his question. 

To further save her, She reached her destination, Helping her to avoid the conversation. Getting off the car, She quickly walks to her destination, Unaware the impact which it left on Gun. Seeing he had nothing else to do. 

He drives the car away to visit someone, He hadn't seen in a long time, While he is also going there someone else is doing the same, But he wants to eat something good. While this all happened we see System nearing the house. 

Arriving closer to his house, He hears many voices coming form inside and also many shoes. Seeing all this, He gets a feeling that something's bad about to happen, Opening the door, He sees the reason for his feeling. 

As a cheerful voice from inside greets him, "Yoo if it my coo,, I mean my friend hahaha". Hearing the cheerful voice, Another voice beside him speaks, As this one seems a bit more serious and rough, "Oye glasses bastard, You got some nerve calling my successor your personal cook, Wanna die".

Hearing these voices, System head starts to spin, Looking around the house, Little Daniel is nowhere to be seen, To satisfy his curiosity, He asked "Where's Little Daniel, He was suppose to be at house at this time".

His question is answered rather quickly, With his cheerful attitude "Ahh The door was locked when I arrived, But after a bit of force it opened automatically". Hearing the answer and looking at the door which falls behind him. 

Veins pop on his head as smiling with an angry expression, He asked them another question "How much was the little force to get my door like this".

This time a rough voice answered "This idiot broke the door and entered, I walked behind him to watch him, To make sure he doesn't break anything else".

Hearing Gun answer system looks at Goo, But Goo changes his face quickly, Putting on a defending face, He defended himself "Ahh that wasn't me, I didn't broke the door, It fallen due to air, But Gun put it door back in place, Which means that door was broken by gun".

After saying that Goo puts on a face like he won some court case against Gun, Leaving both System and Gun speech less, But Gun wasn't the one without words, As he Just spoke 1 thing "Idiot".

Hearing Gun's remark, Goo gets angry and starts to taunt Gun, But he doesn't back down, Seeing the escalating scene, System trys to be a peace maker, Because he don't want Little Daniel to return and find his little house missing. 

"Hey I hope you have yet to eat, I am gonna start cooking, But looking at the kitchen condition, Am missing many ingredients and a door to save thief from breaking and entering, So who will get the ingredients and who will fix the door".

Hearing the Demands for the food, Gun and Goo for another time in their life, They put aside their difference, Without a word being spoken, Goo left to get the food items, While Gun stood up to assess the door damage. 

With swift cooperation of tools and some glue, The door was fixed. Seeing Gun's fixing skills and Goo's return timing. System speaks his bright idea "Hey if you both ever get tired of begin a overworked worker in the HnH group, And have thoughts about leaving, We all can start a fixing and delivery company, And am 100% sure business will be booming".

Hearing his words Both ignored them, With Goo handing over all the items and goes to sit, Waiting for the hard earned reward. After sitting he returns Gun wallet back to him. Seeing this action System gets a headache and goes to cook, He afraid to get his, Money obsession disease.

After cooking and having a feast between them selves, They all share the peaceful time. But who knows will they share such a time like this again. 

While System was with Goo and Gun eating, We see little Daniel working in the store. Manager is also with him, Seeing rush of the customers, Manager spoke "Well it's a rush today and what's with the girls asking you to help them reach the things which they can easily reach".

Little Daniel is tired and wants to go home, The work load today is definitely tiring. While physically it is not though, But mentally he feels tried. Today many females are here and some are getting pretty touchy with him. 

Some went so far to ask for his number and before he could answer, They run faster then he could react, Is someone sending assassins to him, He never knew a girl could run that fast. Today Little Daniel felt it, The fear of begin attacked by anything anywhere. 

The nights passed as a new day arrived, The sunlight hits face of the Darkness loving, Attention seeker, Hissing like a vampire, He gets up cowering the window and cursing god for creating the sun. 

Instead of washing his face he looks at his phone, To see if there's any likes and comment on his video. As soon as he opens the phone, He sees something which lefts his mouth wide open. The attention which he chased his whole life, Have finally reached him. 

He finally achieved it, The true purpose of his life, Seeing The 889k views and 555k likes and 434k comments, He is ecstatic and unconsciously compared it With shin daehoon accounts. All his posts don't have this many likes and comments. 

With 1 video he surpassed his whole career, The account which had 45 followers now has 669k followers. This is it he found it, His way to rise, If someone were to see his smiling face, They would have been scared for there life.

Story ends here:

Once again thank you for reading the chapter. I was rereading my previous chapters, And seeing the mistakes and other things, I compare it to my current writing style.

I made a lot of improvements over it, Which made me proud. Guess someone did say correctly that practice makes perfect. 

Anyway, Comment which chapter was your favorite, and consider leaving a review on this, As the rating has gone down form a 4.3 to 3.9 

Thanks for reading have a good day or night bye.