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Namsoo found the shoes that Zack told him to find and also in the price range which zack told him. He is happy thinking that he will not get beaten by Zack. And also gets to meet a beautiful girl. He pats Himself on the back.
Next day at school:
Namsoo speaks to Zack " Ok I found the shoes you told me and also in the price range you told me. I will go to meeting spot tomorrow. And I will give it to you". Zack says " You already helped me find the shoes. And in the range I set, You have already done, enough now don't worry much I will go to get them tell me the location".
Namsoo not wanting the to miss his chance to meet and talk with a beautiful girl. Is thinking of a way to persuade zack, getting the wounderful idea and says " I have saw many cases like this. The picture might look great and original but the real condition is way worse, and many times selling a replica looking like real". after saying this his focus is on zack reaction.
Looking at zack face he can exactly tell that he is in deep thinking, giving a little more push with him saying " I have a specialty to check if s thing is fake. I also have experience with such things in the past . I will make sure they are in good and wearable condition". These words forced Zack think his advatages or how can he find out difference between real and fakes, with that thanking Namsoo.
Zack ends the conversation by sayin "I guess I am gonna have you to troble you once again".Namsoo thinks 'Zack thinks that he owns me. But I get to meet a beautiful girl and getting thanked by Zack. It's like killing 2 brids with 1 stones".
Next day Namsoo visit the place where they were supposed to meet. As he wore shoulder pads. Shoes insoles. To appear big and well built. But looks like a stick figure with a little weight with passerbus ignoring him, Like he is a plague.
As Namsoo thinks 'hoho I got everything that a popular guy must have. As I am peak human. As with my pads. The girl must fall in love with me'.
Namsoo is thinking to him self. He hears a girl voice form behind him. Namsoo looking at her thinks she is even more pretty in real life. Suddenly his thinking is stopped, Then 2 big guys surround him. They say "look ahead smile act like we are your friend's. Try to do something funny we will break you leg". Dragging namsoo in an alley way.
In an alley Namsoo gets the situation he is in. they took all his money, Which was technically zack's cash. As then guy says " It would be easier if you just transferred the money in online account ,Nowdays people don't fall for it. If I don't upload pictures. These are the shoes that you wanted right. Now with all the money you gave me. Scram".
Namsoo thinks that he will be beated by Zack but to save himself he says " This just take the money but please give me shoes. If I don't take them back he will beat me.". Telling the 3 guys about zack, How he is a great boxer.
The guys hearing namsoo. starts laughing. Namsoo thinks of intimidating them with Zacks names " This is an errand given to me by a boxer. He is a very good fighter. And he is very scary ".
As then the leader of these guys gets angry and says. "I will show you what's scary. As the guy beats up". Beating up namsoo and leaving the alley as a brusied namsoo lays on the floor, Thinking about the beat down he will get from zack.
The next day at school. Seeing Namsoo condition. Zack says "So you went to get the shoes. But instead of the shoes. You got robbed by them. As they took everything. Form you and beated you up". Am I clear. "YES" Namsoo shook his head.
Then Zack continued "If I found out your lying". Zack making an angry face. yui approached Zack and Namsoo. As she asks "what are you guys talks about". As then after explaining everything thing to yui.
As then yui ask if Namsoo has their account. As Namsoo says yes yui checks the account. As seeing a girl yui understood. They must be using this phone untill it gets reported.
As the Namsoo speaks up again " I also thought it would be a beautiful girl. But thier were 3 dudes also". As then Zack with fire in his eyes says . "I understood everything now".
Yui trying to think of a way to help zack with this problem, As she thinks helping zack with this will make zack closer to her. Getting the idea and saying ." Let's make a new account. We can try to contact them with this account, we just need a pic and we cannot use namsoo pics".
Thinking who's pick to use, All hear the class door open, With jinhoo coming with all his glory, While singing to him self, Yui calls jinhoo, Hearing her voice jinhoo is shocked making a strange face. He sees yui snap a pic of him. Not understanding the purpose. The yui say " We got the pic, Now we just need to wait for them to take the bait Cause he looks like an easy target".
jinhoo feels thier talks is unpleasant. Understanding yui plan Zack says "soo looking at jinhoo it will get their attention fast. Now I will meet people who stole my money".
Then system using big Daniel was sleeping beside Zack. Waking up. Seeing Namsoo face like this he asked what happened. after learning it all. System wanting to run form school cause little daniel is working out very hard to lose weight and get his hands on retaekwondo, Thinking of the style cool looking and flashy.
System leaves the school thinking 'I will Burn this place down someday'. Mentally linking himself with Little daniel asking him " Come to xxx railway station fast, We might find a new quest".
As they all are leaving the school they meet Vasco and Jace on the way. As Vasco ask "where are they going". After explaining all Vasco says "Let's go their bad guy. That need to be punished". Then jace says to Vasco " take some guys with you if things go south you might need help".
Then system Daniel says " no need to worry jace. Even if their are 100 we can easily beat them and leave. No need to worry we will be back before you know it. By the way what seeds did you both plant".
As Vasco proudly explains " I planted durain seeds. As it's also called the king of fruits. As when it will grow up he will share it with all".
they all know that a tropical fruit does not grow in Korea. As everyone looking at jace eyes understands. As they all ignored the fruit seeds. As they all leave for the meeting spot where they called.
As then we cut to gian station cafe. As little Daniel sits with Vasco. Zack. And big Daniel. As he thinks to himself how he got here. ' He was just gonna start a jog, suddenly hearing system call him to get to gion station fast ' as reached their called system in my head.
System explains me everything. As then when I was about to leave. I hear system saying follow them. As I was about to leave. I feel someone behind me as I look at system looking at with my big body with a look I swear I will never forget.
As now I am sitting here every girl talking about my big body. And Zack starring at the guys who are on the table beside us.
As much as I want to laugh. At Zack looks. I can feel if I laughed I would definitely be beaten. As then Zack says "Kids in this area have no respect for elders. Look at them fuckers glaring at us should we beat them". As then Vasco tells Zack to get a grip.
But system using big body says loudly " We all know we are handsome. But Sorry we are not interested in guys ".
As little Daniel can swear he can see flames in there eyes. As they start saying " stfu pretty boy. Don't make us break your face".
As then Zack vaso beside me just looked at them like looking at mentally ill children.
As they both thought ' Break his face you will be lucky to touch him. As I am sure this guy is a hidden monster getting out of Vasco grips. Dodging my punches. As I am sure he is stronger then both of us'.
As big Daniel laughs and looks at them and uses fearful presence. As everyone in cafe can feel the change in the big Daniel. As he says " You will be lucky to touch me. Thinking of breaking my face. Good luck". with a use of bloodlust. those guys shut up feeling the pressure form the big Daniel.
As the Feelings cannot be described. The felt like they were in a ice celler. As they were sure they were watched by something they cannot describe. As they know it will be smart to shut up.
As the. Zack seeing those guys look down. He sees Mira. namsoo. yui outside the cafe.
After seeing them he runs out. Grabbing Mira by her shoulder's he asks " Why are you here?". As Mira says "I was here to get a book form the store". As then big Daniel. Vasco And little Daniel followed Zack. Seeing the girls and Namsoo their.
As then they are talking amongst themselves. Namsoo sees the guy who took Zacks money.
One of the guys also spots namsoo, looking at the guy beside namsoo, He singles the leader. And points toward namsoo.
Seeing Namsoo with Zacks. He understands as Namsoo came back with his friends. As Namsoo says "He is the one who stole Zacks money". Zack was busy talking with mira not giving his attention anywhere. The leader attacks zack without giving him a chance.
But his hand is grabbed by big Daniel. As then big Daniel says " Bad manners to attack. Someone who is talking. Now if you return the money you stole form Namsoo. And stop scamming people. We will not report this".
The leader seeing his attack is failed gets angry at big Daniel and says " Let my hand go. Your getting on My nerves". As then big Daniel says "What if don't let go?. What are you going to do then?".
The leader trys to shake of system grip free his hand but is unable to due to big Daniel strength. As seeing his free hand he goes for a punch.
As then big Daniel easily dodges. Leaving his hand in the process. As big Daniel goes to attack. But is stopped by Zack saying "Sorry but this is my problem. As I will be the one to solve this. And thanks for stopping him".
Leader name woojin, lackey 1 name hiru. Lacky 2nd name idgaf about them only remember leader name.
System using the second body of Daniel backs off saying. "bummer I thought I was the one to wipe them all". As then the lackeys with woojin gets angry at Daniel and says " Why don't you say that in our hands range".
System big body smiles and says "You should be thank full of zack, He saved you all the trip to hospital and a leg and arm, I saw that brown headed bastard the way he looked at the girls, Your all lucky cause god helped you today, Cherish the chance he gave you all to live". With a use of skill bloodlust. They all Freeze. All felt they the lackeys felt like they were put in a freezer.
Zack hearing the words of Big Daniel gets angry and says " How dare you even thinks of coming near mira. More so looking at her like a play thing. I was gonna just beat you all a little to teach you a lesson, But now I might go to far come at me you all".
The guys not taking zack seriously . Thinking of his words as joke. One lacky thinking he is big thing form the side of woojin comes forward saying " Your interesting. How old are you". As then he goes for a surprise kick. But Zack dodges. Shocking the lackey. He is hit by a jab follow up by a right hook, Ending with another jab connecting on the chin. Effectively knocking him out.
Woojin looking at the fate of one of the guys signals. The other lacky to attack zack. The guy Who is fat and has a body type similar to logan lee, the big guy form woojin side thinks ' If I can grab him I can win easily'.
Runs toward zack to catch him. His plans fails with him thinking. 'But why is he this fast it's faster then jinwoo'. As then the big guy is easily knocked out by Zack.
As then jinwoo after seeing his both guys defeated is thinking of a way which can help him win the battle analyzing all the points . He thinks ' he knows how to fight. He also beated both his lackey's. But he still thinks big Daniel is a bigger danger. As he easily held my hand. If I make a surprise attack on Zack. I can win'.
woojin then he takes a boxing stance. As then he hears Zack say " Boxing. Huh. But I still need to understand. What Daniel said before was it true. If that we were not here. You would have gone to mess with girls". As woojin is thinking what to say getting an idea to anger zack and then take him by surprise .
woojin says 'Come on it's only fair we the hot ones don't we. If you were in our shoes you might have done the same". These words confirmed zack thinking, With vasco also getting ready to beat sense in the guy, But is stopped by system saying "Zack can beat him. Give him a chance. This battle will prove is he is turly in love with mira".
Vasco hearing this feels sad an unknown tear falls on the ground form vasco eye. Going unnoticed by anyone. Zack taking the stance says in an serious voice " Get ready. As now I will teach you some manners that your family forgot to teach you".
As woojin thinks 'He must be too tired form his previous fight. The only guy other then him which is a threat is that guy in blue uniform. As I am sure he is stronger than him. But seeing Zack he might be tired form fighting seyoung and bear youn. If I strike now I can win'
As woojin goes for a strike. Zacks easily dodges multiple strikes form woojin. Then zack takes offense making an opening with a jab follow up with an uppercut. Hitting, Him clean. Then with an final strike of left hook. Woojin does not fall down . Zack wanting to inflict more pain. Takes a single step back to give woojin a breathing space.
Woojin thinking zack is almost gassed out goes for a fast punch. But zack wanted him to strike. Zack using the same punch that Daniel used to knocked him out. Hitting him. In the chest which forces all the wind out of his lungs. Defeating him easily.
As Vasco thinks about fight ' He just wanted to look cool in fornt of girls as a single tear goes down his eye'. While this all was going on. The guy who was first defeated by zack. Called for backup then in alley many guys come calling woojin boss.
As then lackey says " You all messed up woojin is a 3rd year boss, we still got first and second year on the way to back us". He was gonna keep ranting but is smashed in the ground by system stomping on his head. With all looking at system like he is a menace. Defending himself saying "What he was getting on the nerves, his voice pissed me off".
As then Zack. Vasco. Big Daniel. All step forward towards them as namsoo thinking '18 guys Zack is a little tired form before fight but Vasco and Big Daniel are in perfect condition'.
everyone hear big Daniel who is used by system says " Look guys small fries. Zack you had your fun now my turn. Vasco. Little Daniel protect the girls. Leave the small fries to me".
With 4 guys walking toward System. One of them saying saying "Get lost pretty boy and leave the girls here and we might just spare you all" hearing that guys start laughing. One goes to put his hand on system head. His hand is grabbed with a simple twist, He screams. Looking at the guy who was screaming.
Other 2 guys goes to attack, But are akido throwed. Easily kicking one in the face and punching other in the ground all this happened in just 2 secs. The 14 guys seeing their 3 men down in just secs. They all rush together.
then the one-sided beat down began. As everyone in alley can see and they made sure to write down never mess with big Daniel. As then Daniel. Who was attacked by all sides uses fearful presence. As they all just stop. they all feel one move and their gone. As then they hear big Daniel say "If your not gonna come I will come to you". As then big Daniel uses re takewondoo boup.
As his speed is boosted drastically. As then using a simple kick to knock down. 4 people in seconds. As then the guys get courage to attack. But big Daniel uses knee strike on the guy who was near him.
The guy is throwed back at the rest of the guys. Which makes them most of them lose their balance. As then big Daniel uses the jabs he learned form the Zack. But using boup the jabs speeds are bossted. The rest are easily taken down.
As the 3 guys who were standing. Just started running. As jinwoo who got up for before says "Come back I know you fuckers face I swear. I will find you". As then big Daniel says " Before them you should be worried about your self. Who will you call now".
As Big Daniel says to the jinwoo. As the seeing the situation was out of hand he thinks ' All the second years guys were defeated by him. Where are the 3rd years. Did they ditched us. What kind of monster we met today'.
As then jinwoo thinks fast seeing little Daniel he thinks ' If I can grab that little fat guy. I can easily get out of here. Without much trouble'.
As then jinwoo goes after little Daniel.
After seeing jinwoo coming after him little Daniel gets panics as he thinks what to do he hears system say "It's a small fry just knock his ass out. It's easy".
As then Vasco was about to help little Daniel. But is stopped by big Daniel as he was about to say. But is interpret by big Daniel saying " He needs some experience. If he wanna change". As vaso understood and stops.
Jinwoo thinks why is no one stopping him. As he was about to grab little Daniel uses jabs like system told him. As then after using 2 jabs he uses a staright. And then a left hook knocking out jinwoo.
As both Zack and Vasco are shocked but then they hear big Daniel saying
" I taught that little monster. His talent is far superior then you both. He is like me. He can copy any fighting move after seeing it once". As both Zack and Vasco look at Daniel shocked thinking he is lying.
But then big Daniel says " Zack you must remember that staright that you taught him right after you were drun.."
Before big Daniel can complete his sentence. He is stopped by Zack saying. "I remember you don't have to remind me". As then Zack is thinking 'shut up what will Mira think about me. When she finds I drank with friends '. As he completely forgets about little Daniel talent.
But Vasco was thinking ' Copy after looking once. But his body is not fit enough to perform them. But big Daniel body is in perfect condition. As he said he can also copy. Unlike little Daniel. He can perform them' As then his thinking is cut off by jace coming with the rest of the crew.
Saying we found you. Big Daniel says "Your late jace. Bad review for late arrival ". As then jace thinks 'What happened here. And a bad review. Is he serious we are a school group coming to protect them. But he is talking like we were supposed to bring his food'.
As then Vasco asks jace " How did you find my location". As the jace says "Our friendship is soo strong I can find you through our connection". As jace thinks to him self ' I also installed a tracker app on your phone. Without you knowing'.
After resolveing all the issues they all leave.
Story ends here.
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The story is also on wattpad. As i am re reading it i realize how, i much i improved over time, If you think any thing is wrong tell me in the comments .
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