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Chapter 51 - Ater's heart problems 2

It all started when I was in my second year, a day after failing to get picked for The Kids National singing competition.

I was in my green school uniform, as I walked in the school gates. I didn't have my earring on as it was against school rules to bring in jewelry.

I could hear other kids whisper about me as I went towards my class.

"Hey look at that dark blue hair, isn't he the kid who failed to get into the singing nationals,"

"Yes its him, look at those creapy eyes of his,"

"Don't look at him, I heard you will get bad luck,"

"I heard that his mother ran away from him, because of how creapy he looks,"

"His name is Black meaning he is a cursed child."

"Well I heard that he ate his mother, leaving nothing behind."

If it were just a week before all those guys would be cheering for me. My face looked the same as it did now and I am sure there was nothing creapy about it and I was only frail looking back then.

I just stayed silent and walked in the classroom. It wasn't grand but it had a fine touch to it. The seats were arranged into five rows and 4 colums.

My position was the on the last row, at the left corner of the class. Before I could walk to my seat a sweet voice talked to me.

"Hie Ater, I saw what happened yesterday are you okay,"

The voice belonged to a girl with fair white skin, a charming face with blond hair and eyes. She had a hot average body that would melt who ever stared at her. She was the nicest person at the school, to the point you would hate her, but at that time she was the girl of my dreems.

"I am okay Jane thank you for asking."

After hearing my response she smiled at me and made me blash.

"If you ever need anyone to talk to always know that I am hear for you Ater."

"Suuu.. Sure thing Jane,"

I looked like an asshole as I couldn't keep my cool face at Jane. Jane tapped my shoulder and left and sat back to the front seat.

There were only 5 people in the classroom including me. I sat on my desk and took out my phone and looked at Newly released webnovels.

My eyes cought onto a webnovel that was near the bottom of the list.

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[Webnovel Image]

The Last Warewolf Hunter.

Kim Hyeon-Jin was a third grade Author who died from being hit by a truck on his way to submit his break through novel.

Hyeon found himself in a new world were Warewolfs are lacking at the night, to kill people.

Follow the tale of Singh who was once Kim Hyeon-Jin a third grade Author on Earth, in his journey to end the Warewolves in his new World.

Released chapters 5

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I didn't waste a second and I was already reading the webnovel and it was better than reading about a certain regressor with white hair.

As I was reading more people started showing up in the classroom and two boys that I hanged out with at that time showed up.

"Ater are you reading a new webnovel."

That was a guy we called Manager and I forgot his real name, as it was only used when he got into trouble. Manager was taller and good looking than me. He had short brown wavy hair and matching eyes. He had white fair skin with an atheletic physic.

"Ater Ruth just smiled at me, I think she likes me."

That was Samson, a person also responsible for my messed state of the heart. Samson was a shorty guy, with an almost chubby body. He had white pale skin. His face was better than mine at that time. He had black hair in a buzz cut with matching black eyes.

"Morning guys, its a new webnovel called The last Warewolf Hunter and congrats Samson on getting a girl."

"Yah its interesting that the Author is going to start to lock it at chapter 10,"

Manager knew everything except for girls.

"Thanks Ater let me go talk with her,"

Back then if a girl smiled at a guy, boys would think that the girl proberly likes the guy or that there are already going out. No one of us knew a thing about girls and we could only cheer for Samson.

Samson left his bag at the table infront of mine and Manager sat on the table infront. Samson walked towards Ruth who was talking to Jane in the front.

Ruth had an average looking body with short wavy hair and brown eyes. Once Samson was a few inches from Ruth's seat, he turned back and came running towards his seat.

"Manager can you believe what I just heard?"

Samson tapped Manager as he sat on his seat and I couldn't help but raise my head.

"I heard Jane saying that she likes Ater,"

"What?"

"What?"

Both me and manager were shocked at what Samson said. I liked Jane and hearing that she also secretly loves me too shot me to cloud 9.

Thats the first thing I regret about my high school life. I should have known that Samson was afraid of Ruth and made up a fake story.

I became an experiment tool for Manager and Samson. They spent the whole day making ways for me to propose to Jane and I played along with it as getting a girlfriend would make me one of the dope guys.

The next day after school we were standing at the back of our classroom waiting for Jane. It was a cloudy day but I sweated a tone.

It was my dream to be with her, but when it came to make her part of my dream, I was nervous to the point I almosted made my pants wet.

"Don't worry Ater, its not something hard,"

"Samson is right, we are going to hide behind the huge tree and if anything happens we will suport you,"

Manager draged Samson and hid under the huge tree on my left. I was left alone and I should have used this chance to get away.

When I saw Jane's figure walking towards where I was standing, I calmed down and prepared to use all the pick up lines Manager and Samson lent me.

Jane arrived and her face carried on the same smile just like always.

"Ater you said there is something you really wanted to tell me."

"Yes Jane something deep inside me has pushed me all the way to come to you.

Jane when ever I think about you, I can't seem to keep a cool head and my heart beats above mark 50 when ever I see you.

You are the melody to my songs and I want to keep listen to it for the rest of my life.

You are the turnado in my heart and I would like it stay that way forever as long as you are with me.

Jane you are the most prettiest and nicest person I ever met iin my life."

I felt a lot tbe pressure in my heart lifting at each word I said. Jane smiled at me and stare into my eyes.

"Thats so sweet of you Ater,"

I didn't take her words in my brain as I decided to drop the bomb on her.

"Jane I want you to know that I love you and I want you to be my girlfriend."

My words were shaky and I could see the smile on Jane's face.

"Ater I never took you to be that kind of guy. I love you too and I will be your girlfriend."

After saying her words she left. My eyes looked at her back until she was was gone from the range of my sight.

"Hoyooooo Ater!"

"Ater you hit the sport."

Manager and Samon come rashing towards me as our joined pick up lines worked. I felt happy at the fact that I had finally had a girlfriend.

I should have never done that as it was a double aged sword, that would leave me with scars.

"So guys, now that I have a girlfriend, what should we do together?"

I had just asked the police on how to commit a crime with that question.

"You should kiss her Ater."

"Manager is 100% right Ater. Kissing your girlfriend is the sign that she is really yours."

Sometimes I am really an idiot, how can I trust words of people who never had a girlfriend about kissing. It was more like being told stealing is easy by a person who never stole anything in their life.

"Let go watch @MBaic videos, he has the best dating tips and he is a pro, hehehe."

"Yes Manager is right @MBaic is a pro, hehehe."

The two probably had devil smiles on their faces, but thanks to wanting to get advice from a pro, I didn't notice a single thing.

We watched @MBaic videos and he was indeed a pro, with one word he would charm over a girl and get kissed. I even signed for his online course of how to get girls and kisses on a single day.

The next morning, I was filled with confidence. Who wouldn't after getting advice from a pro like @MBaic.

"Sorry Ater, I can't do that today maybe tomorroww."

Thats the answer I got from Jane for the whole month and here I though @MBaic ideas, would work like magic.