MageManiac

Thrust into one of the most dangerous universes with some advantages our MC decides to make the best of his second chance.

- English isn't my first language but I've tried my best.
- Feedback is always appreciated.
- I own nothing except my MC but he's a pretty cool guy.
- Thank you for giving this story a shot.

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i lost interest cuz the 13-year-old mc is your typical drop dead gorgeous giga chad who can make any woman he looks at fall in love instantly and is a 6ft tall supermodel with 10-pack abs and drove to his first day of high school in his supercar and he has enough charisma to make kings and emperors look autistic in front of him, he is so mature for his age even his father listens to him like he is listening to a priest, and the final nail in the coffin is the fact that after ALL this he is literally just 13, yean no, not my cup of tea.

A great story so far (I've read six chapters), the beginning is not one of my favorites, I don't like it when the protagonists meet a deity and gain powers in roulette wheels before being reborn, I prefer it when the stories skipped that part, but it was still a very good start. I like that the MC has a "realistic" family interaction with the Kents and isn't an annoying person who doesn't consider them family, I like the fact that he hasn't turned into a crazy genocidal killer who goes around killing all metahumans, I like the his powers and how he can grow using magic, after all with Tamaranean powers the MC lost most of the weaknesses that magicians normally have. In conclusion, I hope the author can continue with this level of writing and doesn't discard this story, I always really enjoyed watching Smallville.

a nice story so far and I am enjoying the character should be a good read. I think Chloe deserves some love she gets passed over too easily in all the Smallville stories.

It's great. I don't know what to say since I'm not really good at reviewing. The Mc is likeable and for now we're still at the beginning but the fact it's a harem is a plus for me. I'd like to know if you'll extend the series past Smallville author, like the justice league and teen titans for example?

A well-written story where the main character has charm and a healthy dose of cynicism instead of advanced sociopathy.  It would seem such simple things, but how rarely they actually occur in fanfiction in nowadays.  so far 5 out of 5

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Love it! Great idea! I feel there are not enough smallville fic on here! Keep it up! 

Una buena historia... de superman adolescente.... haber como logras acomodar la historia me pregunto si en el harem estarán la hermana de lex y la prima de superman 

I can’t wait to read the new chapter when it comes out 

Pardon my language but,F*CK, never thought I would one day comment on a book with less than 10 chapters,but this book is a killer fanfic, short but mighty.👏👏👏👏Keep up the good work. Masterpiece ✨

Smallville: Reborn