I've recently started rewriting 'The Fallen Wizard' (formerly known as 'Mystic Journey'). The story initially unfolds at a fast pace, but I intend to slow things down when the protagonist reaches the academy. I'd really appreciate your thoughts on this approach and whether it works for you
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After a beam of holy light, three dialogue boxes suddenly appeared in front of Renji.
[Optimization One: Strength +30%]
[Optimization Two: Convert 20% of damage dealt in each attack into Holy Damage, which cannot be dodged or mitigated]
[Optimization Three: +1 Equipment Slot]
Renji quickly understood that each optimization option was random, and he had to choose one. Without hesitation, he chose Optimization Three.
